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阅读：p3的matching已经变得相对简单了，只挑选几个段落总结大意，鹅且是相对好理解的题干，不是形而上学的那种；
作文：小作 是分享good news➕邀请朋友做客； 大作文考了少见的reason+solution，因为传说大陆笔试几乎不考这类题型，所以之前没动笔写过但是框架是记得的。
题目 人们参加极限运动，为什么？ 有什么办法减少danger？
阅读：p3的matching已经变得相对简单了，只挑选几个段落总结大意，鹅且是相对好理解的题干，不是形而上学的那种；
作文：小作 是分享good news➕邀请朋友做客； 大作文考了少见的reason+solution，因为传说大陆笔试几乎不考这类题型，所以之前没动笔写过但是框架是记得的。
题目 人们参加极限运动，为什么？ 有什么办法减少danger？
It is true that many people like to participate in extreme sports nowadays. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that both individuals and governments should take action to prevent dangers.
This phenomenon is caused by several reasons, but the primary reason is the desire for excitement. There is no doubt that most adults lead a fixed work routine and this makes them feel bored and tedious and encourages them to find something exciting to spice up their life. Therefore they take part in extreme activities and derive the excitement from the adrenaline rush generated by the dangerous sports. Another reason that leads to the popularity of such sports is its function to remove pains in our minds. Some extreme sports provides individuals unique experience, taking bungee jumping for example, participants are encouraged to jump from a very high location and experience a free fall. Such action can facilitate them to empty their mind and forget about unhappiness, which is beneficial for individuals’ emotional well-being.
In my opinion, in order to reduce the dangers caused by extreme sports, both individuals and governments should take measures to prevent accidents. For individuals, it is necessary for them to equip themselves with certain knowledge and skills and receive proper training before participating in the activities. If participants are aware of how to perform correctly in doing the sports, it is less likely for them to make mistakes and get injured. For governments, they are widely considered to be responsible for the safety of relevant sports facilities. If they can conduct regular inspections of these facilities to ensure that the sports environment is safe and the relevant equipment is maintained and functioning properly, the potential dangers caused by accidents will be reduced.
In conclusion, the pursuit of excitement and the forgetting emotional pain are the two main reasons resulting in the popularity of extreme sports, and the risk of sports dangers can be alleviated by the measures taken by both individuals and governments.
根据技能重写的，麻烦 Lynn Yang Fei Teng 关注批评，谢谢?
This phenomenon is caused by several reasons, but the primary reason is the desire for excitement. There is no doubt that most adults lead a fixed work routine and this makes them feel bored and tedious and encourages them to find something exciting to spice up their life. Therefore they take part in extreme activities and derive the excitement from the adrenaline rush generated by the dangerous sports. Another reason that leads to the popularity of such sports is its function to remove pains in our minds. Some extreme sports provides individuals unique experience, taking bungee jumping for example, participants are encouraged to jump from a very high location and experience a free fall. Such action can facilitate them to empty their mind and forget about unhappiness, which is beneficial for individuals’ emotional well-being.
In my opinion, in order to reduce the dangers caused by extreme sports, both individuals and governments should take measures to prevent accidents. For individuals, it is necessary for them to equip themselves with certain knowledge and skills and receive proper training before participating in the activities. If participants are aware of how to perform correctly in doing the sports, it is less likely for them to make mistakes and get injured. For governments, they are widely considered to be responsible for the safety of relevant sports facilities. If they can conduct regular inspections of these facilities to ensure that the sports environment is safe and the relevant equipment is maintained and functioning properly, the potential dangers caused by accidents will be reduced.
In conclusion, the pursuit of excitement and the forgetting emotional pain are the two main reasons resulting in the popularity of extreme sports, and the risk of sports dangers can be alleviated by the measures taken by both individuals and governments.
根据技能重写的，麻烦 Lynn Yang Fei Teng 关注批评，谢谢?
可不可以说：尝试极限运动，可以帮助自己变的勇敢，挑战各种一些已经成立的事实，在这个过程中可以培养creativity. 同时，交到有同爱好的朋友， 在与他人聊天中，会得到empath, 建立关系，从而belonging to this group.
我之前练习了一篇政府是否应该禁止极限运动，不是很理想，找人改的面目全非.....
机考打字打的过来吗，好慌
我之前练习了一篇政府是否应该禁止极限运动，不是很理想，找人改的面目全非.....
机考打字打的过来吗，好慌
我也是9月26日，时间下午，坐标北京，G类机考，个人感觉无论听力还是阅读，都比之前练习的真题要稍简单一点。作文由于考前没有时间复习，（只有一周的每天三小时复习，此次考试纯粹为了摸底）所以无法评价。希望这个分享有点帮助： 重点是机考比笔试估计通常要简单一点点。
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Nowadays some people tend to participate in extreme sports. This essay will start with the factors contributing to this phenomenon and followed by the measures that can be taken to alleviate the issue of danger.
There are several reasons why people like to take part in sports of extreme. The primary reason is that they are easily bored with the ordinary life and want to feel excited. There is no doubt that most people, especially adults, lead a tedious life with 9 to 5 work routines, which motivates some people who cannot derive pleasure from regular sports to seek for more exciting sports. Another reason resulting in individuals to take part in extreme sports is that they want to forget something unhappy. For example, bungee jump encourages participants to jump from a very high position, which enables them to let go of their feelings, thus facilitating to empty minds and erase emotional pains.
Both individuals and governments should take actions to reduce the dangers. For individuals, it is necessary for them to receive some training and equip themselves with relevant knowledge and skills before participating a specific extreme sports, which allows them to perform correctly in practice, minimising the injuries caused by the participants’ wrong actions. For governments, since they are accountable for these sports facilities, which means they should regularly inspect the sports environment and the equipment to ensure that they are maintained properly, thus reducing the injuries caused by the malfunctioning.
In conclusion, the feelings of excitement and forgetting emotional pains are two reasons that drive people to participate in extreme sports. To reduce the dangers, individuals and governments should take responsibility to take some measures.
以上为考场回忆！ 欢迎各位吐槽 Lynn Yang Fei Teng
There are several reasons why people like to take part in sports of extreme. The primary reason is that they are easily bored with the ordinary life and want to feel excited. There is no doubt that most people, especially adults, lead a tedious life with 9 to 5 work routines, which motivates some people who cannot derive pleasure from regular sports to seek for more exciting sports. Another reason resulting in individuals to take part in extreme sports is that they want to forget something unhappy. For example, bungee jump encourages participants to jump from a very high position, which enables them to let go of their feelings, thus facilitating to empty minds and erase emotional pains.
Both individuals and governments should take actions to reduce the dangers. For individuals, it is necessary for them to receive some training and equip themselves with relevant knowledge and skills before participating a specific extreme sports, which allows them to perform correctly in practice, minimising the injuries caused by the participants’ wrong actions. For governments, since they are accountable for these sports facilities, which means they should regularly inspect the sports environment and the equipment to ensure that they are maintained properly, thus reducing the injuries caused by the malfunctioning.
In conclusion, the feelings of excitement and forgetting emotional pains are two reasons that drive people to participate in extreme sports. To reduce the dangers, individuals and governments should take responsibility to take some measures.
以上为考场回忆！ 欢迎各位吐槽 Lynn Yang Fei Teng
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Also, if government invested more money on better facilities / venues, there would be better functions/ equipment to protect participants during the sports, ...
Lynn 我又按照你的范例重写了解决方法的段落。
In my opinion, in order to reduce the dangers caused by extreme sports, both individuals and governments should take measures to prevent accidents. People need to be encouraged to take training courses to practice risky sports. For example, the government can promote affordable training courses for scuba diving, mountain climbing or boxing, so that more people will study the necessary skills before they participate in those dangerous sports. Also, if governments invested more money in better facilities and venues, there would be better functional equipment and safe environments to protect participants during the practice, reducing the possibility of accidents that might cause injuries.