Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
技能1:
现象类 ADV or DISADV
关键词:parents, buy, children, large no of toys,
我的观点:Disadvantage
开头:改写题目 + 观点
B1: Dis1 amount of toys 会花很多的钱,家长会有经济负担
B2: Dis2 不利于children 发展their creative skills.
Conclusion:即使有人认为应该给孩子买多种多样的玩具,但是这不利于孩子的发展和家挺经济管理。
技能2: A>B>C
B1: toys with high quality are expensive, if parents 买很多,会花掉很多钱,feel struggle when they deal with paying credit card, 就没法save money for future use such as university tuition fee or family necessaries.
B2: 拥有很多玩具,不利于孩子的成长,会不珍惜自己所有的,也不会努力争取。
技能3:
B1:花钱(核心词)
如果给孩子买大量玩具(题目条件),家长会花很多钱,付信用卡的时候会有压力,更是没有办法很好的为以后的教育或者家挺其他方面开销而存钱。
B2:不利于孩子的成长(核心现象)
孩子拥有很多的玩具,会变得不知道珍惜自己所拥有的,长大后,会不努力学习或工作,从而失去自己受到良好教育机会或工作机会。
Conclusion: Although some people think that we should give the best things to children, it interferes children develop their personality and family's financial management.