对比分析了一下今天的雅思大作文和剑6T1类似题目考官范文，请大家批评指正

剑6考官范文
Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

advertising——the high sales of popular consumer goods AC+例子
广告导致了消费品的高销量，比如人们手机还能用就去买新款的苹果手机
the real needs——the high sales of popular consumer goods AC+例子
人们需求导致了消费品的高销量，比如人们买新手机新车是为了提升生活品质

范文观点：To some extent, l agree that advertising has an impact on sales, but l would also argue that we do need most of the goods that we buy.

0717大陆雅思大作文
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

广告主要目的 is 提高（非刚需）产品销量 AC+例子
广告主要目的 is 什么？AC
广告有提高非刚需产品销量的作用，但广告的主要目的是促进消费提升人们生活水平
中立 让步反驳 R 举例+R 举例

仿写观点：To some extent, l agree that the advertising does seem to be helping to keep consumer goods moving, but l would also argue that there are other significant purposes for advertising.