每天模拟考,语法打卡:中文逻辑全对以后,怎么翻译成7.5+的文章? Coach给你反馈

Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. discuss both views and give your opinion

B1 一些人认为运动对社会很重要，是因为运动可以促进社会经济的发展。

运动赛事常常会吸引很多的体育爱好者来观看，同时他们也会购买各种各样的纪念品

这样就会带动很多领域的需求，例如 他们会飞到别的城市去参观比赛，需要购买机票，会带动航空领域的需求，

还有他们很多人也会购买自己支持的队伍的衣服鞋子以及对应的纪念品，会带动零售行业的需求

这些需求都刺激了经济的增长，促进了经济的发展

因此运动确实对社会很重要

B2 然而，有很多人,参与体育活动的目的,只是为了休闲娱乐,所以,他们会认为这只是一个leisure activity.

例如下班后他们去游泳，打球，并不是为了成为世界冠军，而是为了缓解工作中的压力， 以及放松自己的身体。

而且,他们也没有想过,自己放松了以后,对于社会的影响:自己身体放松以后会使工作更有效率，带出更多的工作产能，从而对国家经济产生好的影响

当然，他们也看不到,体育比赛,对于整个社会在文化交流和经济增加上面的影响

结尾 我的观点：运动对于社会有很大的影响

有的人认为是一个leisure activity,只是因为,他们从个人的角度出发，看待这个问题，没有看到长远的对社会的影响,但这并不意味着,sports 本来就没有对于社会的impacts，实际上，运动创造了很多需求，带动了社会经济的发展，对社会至关重要。

People hold conflicting views as to whether sports play an important role in society or not. In my opinion, sport certainly brings benefits to society, not only is a leisure activity.

Some think that sports are valuable for society because this will encourage the development of the social economy. Sports events usually have a strong attraction for sports lovers to watch; meanwhile, they purchase a variety of souvenirs as well. In this case, it will result in a significant increase in demanding from many fields, for example, flying to other cities to watch live games would create the needs of the aeroplane business. Also, some people collect things that represent their loving teams like logoed clothes and shoes, which will elicit the retrial industry’s needs. All the things are helpful to economic improvement. Therefore sport does value much to society.

Nevertheless, for some people, the primary aim of taking part in sports is just for having fun and relax. They consider it as a leisure activity. One clear example is that people go swimming or play balls after work, not for becoming the champion, but to release the stress from work and relax their physical bodies. However, they have not ever deeply thought the impact on society: when they feel emotional and physical comfort, it will contribute to efficient work and more productivity, thus prompting the countries’ economy. Besides, they do not have a profound vision of the influence on culture exchanges through sports games either.

Therefore, I take the view that sport has a significant influence on society. Some people regard it as a leisure event just because they think of it from a personal perspective, not from the long-term effect on society. But it does not mean that sports have not social impacts. As a matter of fact, sports do as an essential function in society.

B2 越来越多的人独居还会增加冲突。

一个人居住很多事情都是按自己的想法去做，无需考虑他人

例如何时起床何时洗澡，一周打扫几次卫生

如果越来越多的人都选择独居，人们就会越来越习惯只考虑自己的需求

降低人们站在他人角度思考问题的能力

从而降低人们的empathy ---> 就不能向人们展示empathy

当人们意见不一致的时候，就会增加人们的冲突 ---> 冲突就不可避免了

Therefore reduce their empathy. When people hold different views, it will increase their conflicts.（改写前）

--->

Moreover they can not show their empathy to people around.

When people hold different views, conflicts are inevitable.

Some believe students need to do voluntary jobs (no paid) for helping the local community. agree/disagree

It is recently believed that students have obligations to do some voluntary jobs to help the local community. I disagree with this suggestion.

While requiring students to be volunteers could reduce the community's labor cost and financial stress, it may have some negative impacts on our society. As most students lack working experiences, they may not qualify in some jobs that need specific knowledge. When they conduct these tasks, it is likely for them to deal with things with improper solutions. If students received blame for their mistakes, they might regard such unpaid jobs as an awful experience. After they graduate from school, they would not choose to be a volunteer to support others. Therefore, fewer people may not desire to help others and spread goodwill; social cohesion would not be promoted.

Even students can handle some easy tasks, it may affect students' other fields such as their academic learning process. Being a volunteer in the community would probably cost a few hours a week. It will occupy their spare time, which should be allocated in academic studies. If they don't have sufficient time to review the knowledge, they could suffer a test defeat. Those youngsters would be more likely to lose the opportunities to enter a college to gain professional knowledge and skills. As a result, they may not be able to land a job they liked with decent incomes. In this case, they could afford fewer products and services and their life qualities will be impacted.

As discussed above, it is unnecessary for students to don't have to do unpaid voluntary jobs because this may negatively impact not only students themselves but also the society.

sports are important to social or just a leisure activity both views

Nowadays, there is a conflicting view regarding whether sports are important to society. This essay will discuss both side of the arguments and followed by my own perspective.

Some people believe that sports are of paramount important to society may put forth the following statement. Taking part in some sports activities could burn calories, strength muscle and build a good body shape, which are bring significant benefits to health. If all the people could live with a health body, it would enhance their working efficiency, driving the economic growth in whole society. Besides, holding sports events such as Olympic game and world champion are beneficial to related sectors, accommodation, game tickets and transportation. This would result in generating more job vacancies in those area, allowing more people to find decent job and earn lucrative income. This is a great welfare to society.

Nevertheless, the opponent voice to this way could also justify their opinion, they think sport is the activity that just bring many people together and hang out with each other to take relax. Therefore, Sports are minor contribution to society, there are various other kinds of activities which may have similar effect as sport. For instance, going shopping, watching movies or playing the card games. Those entertainments could also help them relieve heavy pressure and take a break.

As discussed above, while some people may think that sports are only a leisure activity, it not only improve people’s quality of lives, but also facilitate economic boost, therefore, sports are vital to our society.

这样就会带动很多领域的需求，例如 他们会飞到别的城市去参观比赛，需要购买机票，会带动航空领域的需求

In this case, it will result in a significant increase in demanding from many fields, for example, flying to other cities to watch live games would create the needs of the aeroplane business.

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In this case, it will drive demand in many fields , for example, flying to other cities to watch live games would create the needs of the aeroplane business.

increase, lead to, reduce,make 未使用

@Kathy# 这个就有7分了 甚至7.5了

你的句子结构很多样 而且 时态都超级多样

@Eileen Gao# 你读一下 她写的这个风格

我们做一个练习哈

你把 body 段落 重新读一次 然后 把所有 make, lead to, reduce, increase 想办法 重新说一下 中文 再写英文 避免用这些词

我帮你画出来的 句子

@Chenquan# 你也帮忙 改写她的句子 很好的练习哈

@Fei Teng# @Emily Jin# 你们也可以给学生 试一下这个练习 已经到了 7 的学生 可以这样 自己修改 建立awareness

Living alone is not good; the primary reason is that it will make people feel unhappy. If people do not live with others, the time that is spent to stay together with them will be reduced，which will lose the opportunities to share our lives to them as well. In this case, the connection between us will be weaker and weaker. When there are difficulties, we will feel that nobody understands and supports us. Therefore, we will feel unhappy.

Besides, more and more people live alone will lead to an increasing number of conflicts. People can do lots of things according to their thoughts without considering others’ when they live alone, for example, when to get up, when to go bathing and how many times to do the cleaning in a week. If more and more people choose to live alone, they could form a habit of only considering their own need, eventually losing the ability to stand up other shoes. Therefore reduce their empathy. When people hold different views, it will increase their conflicts.

@Lynn Yang#

Hi Lynn这样可以吗

the primary reason is that it will make people feel unhappy.

-----> the primary reason is that people are unlikely to acquire happiness if...

more and more people live alone will lead to an increasing number of conflicts.

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with more people living alone, the number of conflicts will be increased.

or

More conflicts will be caused if there are more people choosing to live alone

Therefore reduce their empathy.

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therefore they may tend to lack the sense of empathy

博物馆更多的是外地游客而不是本地人，原因？解决办法?

In present era, it is quite common for us to see the museum in every city attract enormous travelers from other area rather than local dwellers. This essay will discuss the reason contributing to this issue and the measures to tackle with it.

There are several reasons cause this problems, but the primary reason is travel packages promoting by travel agency. Usually, those tourism companies sell the museum entry tickets combine with other travel routines, such as hotel , transportation and historical attraction. In such case, the travelers are encouraged to purchase those travel packages and then going to the museum passively during they are visiting a out town or foreign country. Besides, museum always present the historical knowledges relate to local area, and those museum require the access fee. Thus local resident believe that they could obtain the knowledges form their friends and family members who know their local history well instead of spending money to visit the local museum.

To deal with this issue, school may organize some summer camp to bring students to local museum, there are plenty of first hand exposure which allow them experience more engaging and interactive. They are able to communicate with staff of museum and see the real historical artifacts, which facilitate their learning process. Moreover，government could hold some public interest events at local museum to arouse the attention of local dwellers, such as inviting some celebrities to have a speech at museum, Promoting local people to visit domestic exhibition .

As discuss above said, travel combo of out town and insufficient of motivation are main factors causes few local residents to visit museum, this issue could be addressed rely on assistants from government and educational institute.

前天晚上我计时模考写了一篇，没写过逻辑的题目

看到题目感觉想法有点乱，有想法但不通顺，心中想一句中文逻辑 写一句英文，很痛苦

写了一半 放弃了😞

@Lynn Yang# 该如何模拟考呢 今天重新看了一遍Stelle的经验贴，她上面有提到先列提纲

考场写大作文的步骤 是怎样的呢

@Emily Jin# @Lynn Yang# 求关注

Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Recently, there are conflicting views regarding whether zoos should be closed. This essay will discuss both sides of the arguments. Those who support the idea that zoos are cruel and should be closed may put forth the following statements. Once animals were kept in the zoo, they may not have freedom when living in a space such as a small cage, which is more likely for animals to suffer from depression. If that is the case, even sufficient food are provided, they may refuse to eat due to unwell feelings, so their life-span will become shorter. By contrast, if zoos are closed, these animals could have opportunities to be back in nature. When they have freedom, they will go wherever they want without limitations, picking up some essential skills such as searching for food and look for companies. Therefore, animals can obtain true happiness.

Nevertheless, those who think zoos can play an essential role in protecting rare animals can also certify their opinions. Due to the decrease in the total amount of some species, they may not survive in nature because of lacking proper food or fighting with their enemies. These animals, such as panda, would face distinction of themselves. Therefore, if zoos are allowed to operate, these distinctive animals would be well protected and receive careful medical treatment. Meanwhile, when people come to zoos, they will have a deeper impression of various animals with such first-hand experience. This process can expand their knowledge as well as help them aware of the importance of protecting animals.

In my opinion, although it is likely for animals to live happy when they are free to back to nature, some of the species would not survive or even died out because of lacking survival skills, thus increasing the rate of their extinction. So, it is essential to have zoos, but quality food, proper living environments, and great care should be guaranteed to ensure animals can live healthily in both mental and physical.

1. when living in a space such as a small cage－ living in a limited space- precise
2. refuse to eat.., so their...., 这里可以用thus shortening/reducing their life-spans, countable noun-你用grammarly查过了吗？
3. searching for food and looking for ...
4. distinction-extinction吧
5. help them aware...- help sb. do sth.>help them be aware of...
6. live happy- happily
7. free to back--free to go back/be back...
8. i would say- mental and physical aspects.
你大体语法没有什么问题哈，只是一些小的语法错误一定要避免，如果有语法错误，7就不容易拿到了，所以写完自己多检查几遍，再用grammarly correct 一下。
@Lynn Yang# 你看一下有没有7.5 ？

oh 谢谢 @Emily Jin
life-span 那个， 在grammly上没有显示出来
我刚刚去查了一下Google， 复数就是lifespans 好像也很少有life-span这种写法。我也不知道为什么我加了个破折号，好像是雅思听力列的？

我用idp 模拟考，就是，语法问题一着急时间一不够就不好检查的出来。 要加快素的留出时间来检查才行

Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In the present era, there is a conflicting view regarding whether zoos have to shut down. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and followed by my own perspective.

Some people advocate that zoos should be closed. They may put forth the following statement, nearly all animals are originally living in a wild area where they can live with their family members and be equipped with various natural food resources. Some scientific research has been proven that animals have similar emotions to human, if they are isolated in a cage by human, they will lose freedom and connection with their relatives, which may result in animals feel live alone. Moreover, they may hardly adopt the artificial feeding model, shorten their life expectancy and impose a risk on their health.

Nevertheless, for those who support protecting rare animals in zoos can also justify their opinion. Even though animals could live in a wild area, they are imperative to suffer different dangers that may cause the dead, such as diseases or hunting by humans and predators. By contrast, keeping wild animals in the zoo could keep out those threats that endanger their lives, and they could be provided deliberate care and sufficient food, which ensures animals are living in a safe circumstance.

As discussed above said, although there is more freedom if rare animals living in wild area, those benefits are minor. It is vital for human to keep animals in the zoos, advanced technology would help human deepen understand more information about animals, this in turn would allow people establish a complete feeding system to guarantee healthy lifestyle of wildlife, even can give them effective treatment when they get ill.

Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your option.

There is a conflicting view regarding whether the governments should tightly control fresh water. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide my own opinion at the end.

Some consider that they have the right to use fresh water as much as they want because it is the necessaries of ordinary life, which can ensure the qualities of their lives. For example, at cooking time, people need to utilize water to clean the vegetables and fruits; at bathing time, people need water to wash their bodies; at the thirsty time, people need to drink water to maintain physical function. If people can get enough water as they want during these times, they can take water to each area according to their needs, which satisfy their essential life requirement, thus maintaining their qualities of daily life. Therefore, fresh water should be provided freely.

However, because of the limitation of fresh water, others take the view that governments should exert strict controls on it. Fresh water is the necessaries to keep people’s physical health, and people can not live without it. Due to the limited freshwater, the amount of fresh water continually goes down with being used by people; and the population around the world keeps raising. The average resource for each person would become less and less, so people are likely to have problems with the loss of fresh water. In this case, there are disadvantages to people’s health, even leading to death. Therefore, they support fresh water should be controlled tightly.

As discussed above, although water crisis can be relieved somehow under government’s control, there are some other ways to address this problem, such as researching on the technology about transferring sea water to fresh water. Therefore, in my opinion, for people’s living better, fresh water should be freely used.

Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historic objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is suggested that public museums and art galleries will become unnecessary since individuals can learn historical objects and art-work by browsing the website. However, I can't entirely agree with this statement.

Although watching historical artifacts and art-work online are accessible and affordable, because people do not need to travel to a physical distance, and those websites provide free information. Those resources are not always present accurate information. Also, it is more tedious than visiting the real objects.

Museum and gallery display a variety of exhibitions that offer visitors rich first-hand exposure, which makes their experience more interactive and engaging. They are able to watch exhibition close up and communicate with staff who work in those museums and galleries, allowing them to leave with depth impression about historical and artistic objects.

Meanwhile, suppose museums and galleries are going to disappear. In that case, new findings of historical artifacts may be allocated to some outdoor circumstances in the future, which may impose some dangers on those valuable artifacts because they are more likely destroyed by some extreme weather such as storm and flooding, or unwanted behaviours of human. By contrast, numerous professional employees and complete equipment in the museum and gallery ensure those exhibitions can be maintained and preserved in a secure position.

Taking into the consideration above said, museums and galleries can not only provide visitors more engaging learning experience but also persevered exhibitions in safe. Thus, it is necessary for us to keep those meaningful public facilities.

Grammarly 给我修改为啥总是建议把被动语态给换掉o.o

Hello, 提个小建议，Task2 不要缩写哈，can't = cannot;
祝我们都能上7分！

我这是是grammaly改完复制过来的 忘记把缩写去掉了 ，谢谢提醒

Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people who tend to live alone. As far as I am concerned, this is a negative trend.

Those who prefer to live by themselves are less likely to interact with their friends and families. In that case, they may find it difficult to deeply understand their relatives' thoughts and behaviours, resulting in impair the intimacy and sense of belonging among family members. If they suffer some difficulties in their lives, they would feel anxiety and helplessness.

Meanwhile, if more dwellers choose to live alone, it would increase the demand for accommodation. Thus the price of rent and purchase accommodation is gradually growing in the future, which may impose a financial burden on each resident because it would contribute to cost residents more money on living. Also, the boosting demand for housing will increase the need to build them. However, every city has limited land resources. In this case, the human may seek environmentally Harmful methods to create extra accommodation, such as deforestation and filling the lakes, which will lead to a devastating impact on the environment.

Although living alone can provide more private space and freedom, those sense of excitement is minor. Constantly living in an isolation circumstance would cause people to feel loneliness.

As discussed and analyzed above, living alone contributes to negative emotional well-being and financial burden. Therefore, it brings more drawbacks than benefits.

对 最近主要在做就是看范文，学句子结构和词汇，之前把自己写的放进grammaly里面改，发现句子结构或者标点符号使用有的地方有问题，所以grammaly系统之前总是说要我分段，说有的写法可能reader 很难理解，之前考试我看考官评语也是说 有的时候标点符号使用有问题，给考官造成理解困难。 逗号使用和断句有问题

@Chloe# 其实与其留出更多时间检查语法错误，不如你自己做一个总结语法错误的表格，每天写作文前要复习前几天的语法错误，这样会有awareness不会重复出现那些语法错误，我给你attach screenshot，然后发邮件给你一个我们以前用过的语法表，非常好用。

大家可以一起看下截图，如果需要，可以找自己的coach要哈。

Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that governments should take the responsibility of investing in and supervising scientific research rather than private sectors. I disagree with this statement because both parties ought to get involved with it.

In order to become a constantly thriving country, the national scientific industry must keep progressing and make many more breakthroughs in the areas such as health and technology to contribute to the quality of life of citizens. Funding and controlling scientific research always begins in the government and is widely thought to be the responsibility of the state. They will be the first to make a great amount of investment to afford the resource of research and hiring relevant professionals, to supervise whether any research is conducted properly according to the regulations and to test the outcomes' safety.

Investing and controlling research projects cannot be achieved just by governments. There is no doubt that private organizations normally focus on scientific researches that are highly profitable. If they are keen on increasing the revenue, it is more likely to financially support researches to purchase relevant equipment and offer competitive salary to attract top talent to get involved, plus controlling progress carefully, which can facilitate the efficiency and effectiveness of researching, increasing the odds of ideal research outcomes. When these scientific outcomes are transferred into competitive products or services in the market, private organizations will be rewarded with a good profit, which is a contributing factor to national economic growth.

As discussed above, as both governments and private organizations bring different benefits, I think that both should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research.

@Lynn Yang# @Fei Teng#

按照Lynn要求在考前写一篇responsibility类的题，在Feifei的指导下，B1是按照责任类写的，B2是按照 利弊分析写的；

Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher. Others say that student attitudes also do matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

AC类

B1: 好老师?educational success; 好老师会努力改善课堂体检，把课程设计的有意思有互动，这样才会吸引和保持学生的课堂注意力，是他们学习知识的最好方式，因为他们的大部分学习时间都在课堂上，就有助于学习成果好，也就是教育的成功。

B2: 学生态度?educational success;

尽管老师改善课堂体验可以提高学生的注意力，没有学生的积极响应就没那么有效果。如果学生愿意展示积极态度对教育，比如上课听讲，按时完成作业，考试不作弊， 他们就会自然而然学习到知识，为他们的教育带来好处。

B3：两者好处互补;

There are conflicting views regarding whether a good teacher mostly or students’ attitudes also can contribute to the success of education. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument and followed by my own perspective on this matter.

People who advocate that good teachers play the most important role in educational success may put forth the following argument. A good educator tends to make efforts on the improvement of the class experience for students. Through designing interactive and interesting classes, a teacher might be able to attract and sustain the attention of students on the lessons for an extended period of time. Such advantage can facilitate students to acquire knowledge and skills taught in the best way because they spend most of their study time on the class, which leads to improving their learning outcomes, thus succeeding in education.

Nevertheless, those who think that students’ attitudes also matter can easily justify their opinions. Even though students’ concentration on class can be improved with the effort made by a good teacher, it may be become less effective without students’ appreciation to it. If students are willing to show active attitudes to schooling, such as paying close attention to classes and finishing the homework on time, they will be able to equip themselves with knowledge and skills naturally, which is beneficial to their education.

In my opinion, a good teacher and students’ attitudes can bring complementary benefits to the success of education. A teacher’s tendency to design an engaging class experience does help to get more focus of students on the lessons, while youngsters’ attitudes to study also effect the educational achievement.

@Lynn Yang# @Fei Teng#

谢谢 Lynn 老师 非常不错啊，

我工作要写academic essay/reports, Grammaly 常年订购😄

我book到了十月和十一月的考试，最近在疯狂的训练。

我发现纽约地区很多笔试的地方也能book考试了，在十二月份。

其它的地区因为离我太远，没有研究。

? ，有人可以帮我看看小作文不??

In the present era, the payment of mobile applications has become more popular apparently, I believe the “e-payment” would bring more benefits than drawbacks.

For one thing, paying via mobile apps offer customer more convenience. Mobile application could store all financial information in the cell phone, and those portable devices could put in the pocket, which is very easy for people to carry on. In such a case, people are not necessary to carry a pile of cash or credit card. They could pay their bill by using those digital apps, such as “Apple Pay” and “Android pay,” contributing to more convenient shopping experience.

For another, mobile payment is also beneficial to environment and social stability. The traditional payment is base on cash that is made of paper. Producing those money need to consume significant amount of plants, which is very environmentally harmful mean. In contrast, mobile apps are a paper-free transaction process, allowing people to save many papers and facilitate environmental protection. Moreover, there are much crime relate to cash robbery, if more people use their cell phone to purchase, it would reduce the criminal tendencies of this kind and this in turn would make the society more stable.

Nevertheless, we have to consider the downside of mobile payment. Some people may be concerned about storing their financial information in an electronic device is not safe, because many thchnological crimes could steal mobile users' personal information. If they lose their cell phones by some inattentive behaviors, it would result in leaking information. Thus it imposes some threat to their asset. However, many “e-payment” are equipped with security check system, such as fingerprint unlock and face identification, which ensures the financial information is secure.

Taking into the consideration above said, although there are negligible disadvantages mobile apps may cause, it can be addressed by varying safety check systems. Those payment method are beneficial both to individuals and society.

我觉得你写的好棒呀~
portable devices，a pile of cash，paper-free transaction process，security check system
看似简单的搭配我自己写的时候是想不到的。
好棒

可能刚好这个题材 我比较熟悉，有的文章写完自己觉得用词啰嗦，也想不到什么合适词汇。

Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? What is solution?

Nowadays, many people think there is increasing misbehaviour in every society and inadequate respect among individuals. This essay will discuss the factors contributing to this issue and the solution to tackle with it.

The most essential reason that leads to this unwanted phenomenon is insufficient education. Education expenditure is more expensive than before, resulting in many people who live in poverty cannot afford the educational cost. Thus, they may find it difficult for them to enjoy education and find a decent job to earn money to support their lives. Consequently, consider seeking some illegal means to make money and be convicted as anti-social offenders. Moreover, unemployment is more likely to cause a huge difference in society's financial status as a whole. In such a case , they may not regard this distinction as norm and conflicts would occur frequently, then contributing to impair the respect between different people.

To address this problem, the government should take some action. For one thing, the authority could allocate funding to support education, allowing lower-income groups to enjoy knowledge, which would help them land a promising job, earn money, and reduce their criminal tendency. Meanwhile, the government could also hold some public interest events that encourage people from different economic backgrounds to participate. such as sports campaigns and music performances. Those interactive activities provide varying opportunities to participants to meet people from different economic status, promoting them to deep understanding with each other, cultivate their empathy, and strengthen respect in society.

As discussed and analyzed above, the anti-social behaviours and lack of respect mainly caused by insufficient education, this problem can be addressed by funding education and holding interactive activities from the government.

2020/10/10 中国大陆作文

Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？

Nowadays, an increasing number of people apply robots to do some household work or working tasks. I think it is a good thing.

Using robots to finish some works is beneficial to peoples’ emotional well-being. It is quite common for us to see there is numerous people have hectic life that cause many work life pressure to them. They have a lot of responsibility to their shoulder regardless of working task or household. Thus, they may find it difficult for them to squeeze adequate spare time to interact with friends and relatives. If the robots can help human do some jobs, they would acquire more free time to spend with family members and friends. Contributing to a stronger sense of connection and intimacy among others.

Furthermore, automatic working could promote better working efficiency and safety. Robots are able to finish many repeatable duties faster and more accurately than human, such as manufacture and industry, which save lots of time that cost on producing and subsequently boosting productivity. Besides, some dangerous job may impose some threat to human lives, for example, exploring deep ocean and outer space. Robotic application will eradicate those dangers that is taken by human.

However, we have to consider the downside of using robots. Some people are concerned that machines could replace more job vacancies and lose their jobs, resulting in those who cannot get a job to earn money. But such impact can be controlled, there many creative tasks that can only be taken by human, and the increasing demand in developing and selling robots would generate extra jobs which could compensate the unemployment in other sectors.

As discussed above, robots application brings several benefits to people, it helps build more cohesive and intimate relationships and strengthen working efficiency and security.

2020/10/10 中国大陆作文

Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development？

Nowadays, robots have been used more and more often at people's home and their workplaces. I think it is definitely a positive trend.

The primary reason is that using robots to do household can bring benefits to individuals. In the old ties, people had to do all the tasks by themselves, like washing dishes, washing clothes, and cooking, which made them left no time to communicate with their family members, leading to a weak family bond. By contrast, if a robot can replace the role humans play in doing household, people will have a lot more spare time. When they spend time with their families, even simple face-to-face communication, it would be easier for them to understand each other better, have a close connection with them, and increase their family's sense of belonging.

In addition, widely usage of robots will lead to positive results in society. It is commonly known that a robot with sufficient electricity can conduct tasks 24 hours a day. If more robots are used in a company, people would have time to deal with other complex tasks. In that situation, people's working efficiency would be increased, and a lot more jobs can be done simultaneously, generating more profits for the company. Therefore, economic growth will be increased.

As discussed above, it is a positive trend to have more robots used at home and work because it will allow people to have a stronger relationship with their families and bring economic benefits to the society with more productive companies.

Nowadays, using mobile applications to process payment has been widely used among customers. I think it will bring more benefits rather than drawbacks.

The primary reason is that it can help protect the environment. Using mobile applications means that people do not need to bring credit cards which are made from plastics. Once they become expired, they will turn into non-disposable rubbish, which will release many pollutants during dealing with the. If more and more customers prefer to use mobile applications to purchase, the supplement of non-disposable materials used to produce credit cards would be decreased, generating fewer pollutants into the air, then improving air quality.

Another thing is that such a payment method can lower the risk of getting sick. It is commonly known that conventional payments such as cash or credit cards have the potential to have germs attached to the surface. If one person has flue, others whoever touches its cards or cash may have the chance to get sick. By contrast, there is no interaction when customers use mobile applications to pay, helping people stay away from infectious diseases.

Nevertheless, someone may argue that it is unsafe for individuals to use such a payment method since once the phone is stolen, customers may suffer from financial risks. However, it can be solved by increasing the payment safety security such as unlock these applications with a password or facial ID to verify the payment process.

As discussed above, the popularity of using mobile application payment has more advantages as it is beneficial to the environment as well as people's health. Although there are some drawbacks, these negative sides can be solved.

Nowadays, there are conflicting arguments based on whether successful education relies on a good teacher or student's attitude. In this essay, both sides of the view will be discussed, followed by my own opinion.

Those people who agree that having a good teacher is more important may present the following arguments. It is commonly known that a good teacher has not only professional teaching skills but also the right moral values. With various teaching methods, it will be more likely for students to acquire knowledge effectively, which can help them have a better learning outcome, thus increasing their academic results. Meanwhile, since a good teacher can set a good example to students with positive moral values, students will learn from the teacher and pick up what is right and what is wrong, helping them become good social well-being and make education succeed.

However, those who think student attitude also do matter can also justify their opinions. Students who have good attitudes towards study will show good self-discipline. If they study alone without a teacher's supervisor, they will also set goals by themselves, have good routines, and finish homework, helping them learn more effectively. Such learning habits can facilitate them to achieve better scores at school. Besides, when students have a good attitude, it is unlikely for them to be affected by peers who have bad learning behaviors. They would not conduct some improper behaviors such as cheating.

As discussed above, teachers can turn the learning process into much more effective and show them positives of moral value, while it is the student's attitude that ensures they would not be affected by others. Therefore I think education success depends on both a good teacher and students' attitudes because they can bring complementary benefits to students.

Living in a country where have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problem as well as practical problem. Agree or disagree?

It is suggested that living in a nation where people have to speak a foreign language may lead to many problems in different aspects, I disagree with this statement because it fails to see the complete picture.

Admittedly, living in a foreign language-speaking country may cause people to undermine their cultural identity, and some troubles interfere with their lives. As an integral part of the culture, language plays an indispensable role in it. Suppose people constantly communicate with other by speaking a foreign language. In that case, they are less likely to use their own languages, resulting in them being gradually unfamiliar with their mother language, making them feel disconnected from their own culture. Consequently, impairing the sense of belonging to their own countries and awareness of cultural identity. Moreover, those who are not proficient in a foreign language, they may find it difficult for them to interact with local people effectively, in this case, misunderstanding and conflicts would occur frequently, this in turn will cause many negative impacts on productivity regardless of studying and working.

However, some people are good at learning a new language would derive varying benefits from living in foreign nations. For those who speak fluent foreign language, they are able to communicate well with locals from different cultural and economic backgrounds. If they can regard this distinction as the norm, they would respect and accept them, then they could consider a problem in shoes of others, which is a vital social skill. Meanwhile, the empathy helps them get along with others well, allowing them to make more friends and offering them opportunities to learn innovative ideas to approach the tasks in their lives, contributing to efficient problem skills. This can be applied in many areas of life.

As discussed above, living in a foreign language speaking country could both bring benefits and drawback, it depends on the language studying ability of people. If they equip with strong learning ability, they could master many practical skills. Whereas, if those are poor language studying ability, it will cause many severe problems to them.

你每次写都是模拟考状态写吗··?

不是， 有的新一点题是模考写的， 有的旧的是之前想过逻辑的
最近国内笔试作文题都挺难 好像

Many scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send messages into space to contact these life forms. Other scientists think this is a bad idea because these life forms could be dangerous.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

哈喽，我看了一下原题是　Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the this statement?

你少了个social。

求吐槽。

真的是太没状态了。感觉特别糟糕

Nowadays, it is believed that living in a foreign language speaking country will lead to many problems. I disagree with this view because not everyone will struggle with these problems.

For most people, it is undeniable that people may feel stressed and anxious when they need to communicate with others in a foreign language. In this case, many misunderstandings would frequently occur in different life situations, which is uneasy for people to solve practical issues such as seeing a doctor or claiming their insurances. Although they can ask a translator for help, they would probably feel they are not capable people who always need to rely on others, lowering their sense of self-esteem. Therefore, people will live with unhealthy mental status, and it will be hard for them to experience good emotional well-being.

However, we need to consider some other special cases, such as those with optimistic characteristics. When they live in a country where they had to speak a foreign language, they will learn the language as much as possible. Such a positive attitude and mindset will allow them to communicate with locals and regard embarrassment as the norms, helping them make friends with the local people. As a result, they will not be restricted by their own cultures and analyze problems with experience from different cultures and countries and then find the most effective way to tackle them.

As discussed above, everyone's situation is different. People who feel positive towards a new living environment may benefit from it while others will face various aspects. Therefore, this argument is not suitable for all people.

我写的那个有一部分是根据你那个逻辑链翻译的

10/15 大作文： many scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planet and want to send messages into space to contact these life forms. Other think this is a bad idea because these life could be dangerous. Both views

In the present era, there is a conflicting view regard whether humans should try to contact the intelligent life from outer space. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and followed my own perspectives.

On the one hand, those who advocate to contact Aline because we could derive benefit from learning new intelligent life forms. As every culture and civilization has stereotypical views and shortcomings, which may restrict their outlook and potential success. By contrast, if human could exposure to outer cililizations, we could learn innovative ways to approach the tasks. When they face a problem, they can consider it from different angles, contributing to efficient problem-solving skills and developing technologies. This can be applied in various fields to address many issues that still bother humans, such as environmental protection and cancer treatment. Consequently, this would derive economic growth and improve people’s quality of life.

On the other hand, other scientists think building a connection with an intelligent life form is not a sensible idea can also justify their opinion. There is no doubt that people have very limited understanding of other existing life forms now. Thus, they cannot ensure the safety of establishing connections with the existing lives of outer planets. If those intelligent life equipped with better technology and find the resources and living environment of Earth are better than their own, they would invade our planet and trigger a war, which imposes many threats to our lives.

Taking into the consideration above said, I think humans should not try to contact intelligent Aline life forms now, since we are uncertain about those outer civilizations, such as their language or behaviors. Therefore, we need more time to explore those life forms to ensure we could communicate with them effectively and get along with them securely.

10/15 大作文： many scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planet and want to send messages into space to contact these life forms. Other think this is a bad idea because these life could be dangerous. Both views

Nowadays, there has been an argument among scientists whether we should try to contact the intelligent life forms that might live on other planets. In this essay, both sides of the view will be discussed, followed by my own opinion.

These people who believe that sending a message to the out space life forms is reasonable may present the following ideas. It might be true that life forms lived on other planets are more intelligent than human beings. If we send signals to space and get in touch with them, we would explore more knowledge in different aspects. In that case, it is likely for us to acquire high-tech skills. When scientists adopt these technologies into humans' daily lives, it might help us solve many real-life problems such as purifying water or even extending our life expectancy, thus increasing our quality of life.

However, those people who think such a suggestion is not smart can also justify their opinions. If these life forms are smart enough, they might have discovered the earth and known everything about humans. Under this situation, not sending messages will be a better choice because they may regard such a message as disturbing, which may lead them to protect themselves. By then, the human being may suffer from many unknown dangerous things, threatening our lives.

In my opinion, it is not wise to sending a message to life forms in outer space. The reason is that although they might be smarter than human and lives in a more advanced planet, we can not fully confirm that the result that will bring us is only benefit without any negative impacts. Thus it would be more suitable for humans to send a message when we become more knowledgeable about the space.

Some people think that it's good for a country's cultures to show imported foreign film and TV programs.Other people think that country should develop their own film and TV programs instead.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion。

Nowadays, there is a conflicting view of whether introducing foreign movies and TV programs is beneficial to a country’s culture. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and followed by my own perspective.

Those who advocate importing foreign movies and TV programs may put forth the following statement. Watching the overseas film could compensate the weakness of their own culture. As those entertainment programs usually present their countries' culture in many aspects, such as language, historical attraction, and conventions. Every culture has stereotypical views and shortcomings, if people only connect with their own culture, it would restrict their outlook and potential to succeed. In contrast, if they are exposed to world culture, they could get more innovative ideas and learn new ways to approach tasks, making their own culture better.

However, the opponent way of thinking has their own opinion can also easily justify. For one thing, developing domestic entertainment programs can strengthen the sense of belonging to the nation. Local movies and TV programs represent a country's culture, exposure to those recreation help people in-depth understanding the thoughts and behaviours of their culture, and inspire them to relate their lives to the nation as a whole, contributing to improve their cultural identity. Moreover, movie-making would generate more associated job vacancies such as movie directors, actors and equipment manufacture, this in turn, will drive economic growth.

In conclusion, both imported foreign entertainment and the development of domestic movies and TV programs could bring benefits to the country. Foreign works compensate the disadvantages of local culture, whereas domestic programs help improve the cultural identity and economy. Thus every country should support both programs.

B1 跟逻辑链有点不一样，逻辑链是 foreign culture—-learn new way apporach task—-thnik out side box—-creativtiy， 但是题目是问引起外国影视作品对文化好处。 有人帮我看看想想不。

hello， 同好， 我也是被C限制住了，但是题目很明确的是AC类型，而且C是一个国家的文化。所以我就没有提Creative thinking，一段写的是cultural diversity, 另一段写了culturAl identity.

我就顺着说了有了creation就能创造出更好的作品之类的。但我表达的也不是很好

我当时想了很久，实在想不出对本国文化有什么好处

这个逻辑卡片里有关于cultural identity

Some people think it is good for a country’s cultures to show imported film and TV programs. Other people think that country should develop their own film and tv programs instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinions.

Opinions are divided on whether it is beneficial for a country’s culture to play foreign film and TV programs or to produce domestic productions. I believe that both should be promoted because they have different advantages.

People who believe that showing foreign films and TV programs is advantageous to a nation’s culture may put forth the following argument. There is no doubt that these productions usually contain the unique tradition, language and history of the country who produce them. For example, the famous TV drama ‘Downtown Abbey’ presents the British culture such as afternoon tea routine and the work of a English butler. Through watching foreign film and TV productions, audience will learn the distinct cultural characteristics of that country, which may feel motivated to practice them in reality. This leads to more foreign languages, food, traditions and other related practice being accepted by the local, thus bringing benefits to a country’s cultural diversity.

Nevertheless, those who think that a country should develop domestic films and TV programs can also justify their opinions. Since these works serve a purpose to deliver a country’s culture, mentioned above, domestic film and TV industries can create shows to spread their own culture. In China, for instance , there are many places such as Hong Kong and Tibet famous for their local traditions, language and history. If more movies and TV programs featured these local cultures, domestic audience would be inspired to relate their life to them, and developing their sense of belonging to the roots. Furthermore, people who are proud of their own culture would be encouraged to learn more about national customs and to participate in traditional events, thus enhancing their cultural identity.

In my opinion, the importation of foreign film and TV programs and the domestic productions should be encouraged at the same time, because they can bring unique cultural benefits to a country.

@Lynn Yang# @Chenquan# hello, 我也觉得这个话题不好写，求吐槽

我觉得你写的好棒啊。很扣题

我一开始也想到diversity 但是不知道diversity 怎么推到出来

这个在逻辑卡片里没有，我就说看进口影视可以学习外国文化进而实践，那本国就有外国文化现象，就自然而然的成为文化多样性了。你们觉得通么？

Some people think that it's good for a country's cultures to show imported foreign film and TV programs.Other people think that country should develop their own film and TV programs instead.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion。

Nowadays, there are conflicting views on whether we should introduce foreign media productions pr focus on our film and TV programs. This essay will discuss both sides of the view, followed by my own opinion.

Those people who believe that foreign movies and programs can bring benefits may present the following ideas. Since every culture has its own shortages, focusing their own would restrict our mindsets by its stereotypical beliefs. So importing foreign programs will allow people to explore new ideas and see different opinions towards one topic, cultivating their critical thinking skills. Meanwhile, those various thoughts and behaviors with different cultural backgrounds might inspire people, which helps them associate different things together from an original perspective, increasing their creativity and generating better films and television works.

However, those people who think domestic productions are more important can also justify their opinions. If people put effort into developing our own films and TV shows, it would help citizens gain an in-depth understanding of our cultural characteristics, enhance their cultural identity, and increase their sense of belonging to their country. In that case, we would be willing to cooperate with other society members to contribute to the country's future, thus leading to a more cohesive community.

In my opinion, both imported foreign media programs and domestic ones are important as they can bring complementary benefits to a country's cultures. Therefore, every country should not only display their own cultural TV programs and films, but also those from other nations.

另外一个是我点的 哈哈哈哈

Nowadays, there are conflicting views regarding which factor can contribute to Successful education. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and followed by my perspective.

Those who think that successful education should depend on a good teacher may put forth following views. The professional teacher is usually equipped with plenty of expertise and rich teaching experience, which offers them insight into the best way to educate their students. And these experience helps them to create a reasonable studying plan that is suitable for all student. In such a case, every student could learn knowledge effectively, and the desire result would be achieved. Moreover, those educational professions have exposure to more ups and downs and provide them aware of what is morally right and acceptable. If they can convey those experience to their students, it would help students understand the correct moral value, preventing them from misleading by some unpleasant behaviors. Then it would contribute to succeed of education.

Nevertheless, some people believe that students' attitude is the deciding factors of decent education can also justify their opinion. The positive studying attitude usually involves motivation and enthusiasm, making students feel motivated at learning and giving them faith to preserve when they face difficult situations. Besides, for those who have a positive study attitude always possess strong self-discipline. As a result, when they study by themselves, they would concentrate on studying processes and hold them accountable for their outcome. Consequently, improve the study efficiency and achieve decent results.

As discussed above, a good teacher has professional knowledge and correct moral value, whereas a positive attitude could motivate students to learn knowledge more efficiently. Thus both of two factors are crucial to impact on successful education will be achieved or not.

结尾加一句 successful education depend on multiple sets of facotrs？

口语写完发给feifei啦，忘了发你啦，一会给你也发一份 sorry

In the present era, there is an increasing importance of fashion to young people. It is suggested that it would detrimental to them. I disagree with this view because it is not suitable for all situations.

Focusing on fashion excessively would impair the sense of belonging among youth and reduce their personal identity. Young people usually associate the concept of fashion with some particular objects and assume that they own some products that means fashion. For example, purchasing a lot of modem style cloth, bags and accessories, which makes them become materialism. In this case, they would judge a person according to the fashionable product that people have, so conflicts and misunderstanding may occur frequently among those youngster, resulting in negative impact on sense of belonging to their friends. What is more, if the fashionable products sustain their attention for a long periods of time, they may find it difficult for them to find out what products is their real needs and suitable to them. Consequently, reduce their self-awareness of identity.

However, we have to consider some exceptional cases. Fashion is beneficial to people who are working or studying in the art field since those sectors are intertwined. If the art-related profession exposure to various fashionable information, they would be encouraged to think out side box, then link these information with their jobs so that them could generate more innovative ideas, contributing to cultivate their creativity.

In conclusion, young people concentrate on fashion would impair the intimacy and connection with their friends, but it is necessary for the art-related profession to interact with fashion because it can help work more efficient.

这篇感觉写的不太好，很多表达都是不确定的，上次找idp批改作文，comments说 词汇只能给6 因为用法不准确，考官把好多高级词汇都换成一些很基础词汇o.o

Nowadays, there are limited regulations on design buildings in some cities. I think it would bring more benefits than drawbacks.

The most obvious benefit of freestyle designing is cultivating people’s creativity. The designer needs to apply their imagination to create a building’s style, such as color，structure and layout. If those dwellers are offered adequate freedom to design the house and the office. In that case they are more likely to try out different ways to create various buildings in a city, which encourages them to think outside the box, contributing to cultivating their creative thinking.

What is more, reducing the regulation of building design is also beneficial to society as a whole. As those design policies are usually controlled by local governments. once the government allows locals to design the buildings that they live and work without any control, residents would feel understood and supported by their authorities. These empathy help them more relate to the governments so that they would get along with each other well. Consequently, resulting in fostering a cohesive society.

However, we have to consider the downside of this trend. Since there are many people not quipped expertise associated with building design, they may not create an appealing house or office, which negatively impacts the city’s beauty. This issue could be addressed by the government’s action, which can impose a general guideline that offers some sensible advice about design and allows residents to decide by themselves.

In conclusion, freestyle of building design generates advantages for individuals and society. Though the drawback do exists, it can be minimized.

好像 被忽略了??

okok，记下了 ，这句话 如果是你写 会咋写，我感觉我写的有点直译过来 很生硬的感觉

In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?

In some countries, customers throw a large amount of food that purchase from stores. This essay will discuss the factors contributing to this problem and the solution to tackle it.

The primary reason lead to food wasting is that customers' financial status is better than before, so they can buy more food. However, nearly all kinds of food have expire date; when people can not consume that food, it would be throw way if it passes expiration day. Meanwhile, in order to earn greater profit，many shops and restaurants advertise attractive promotion packages to push customers to buy their products. Therefore, most consumers cannot resist such tempting marketing strategies, resulting in buying more food rather than their real need and throwing them away.

To solve this issue, the government should impose regulations to supervise shops and restaurants, allowing them to make a reasonable promotion plan rather than push people to purchase their food blindly. Subsequently, customer who wastes excessive amount of food needs to get punishments. In this case, customers could save their money, and there is little impact on shops' profit earning. Besides this, the government could also hold some public interest events such as food donations every month, encouraging dwellers to donate surplus food to people living in poverty. This is a win-win situation rich people can avoid food-wasting, and poor people can get support from society, which helps them solve food scarcity.

As discussed above, the financial abundance of customers and the unreasonable promotion of shops are the main factors resulting in food-wasting. The solution relies on official rules imposed by authorities and food donation events.

这篇文章之前写过一次，这个做过一点修改 不知道有没有7

It is suggested that youngsters should stay at school until the age of 18, I cannot entirely agree with this opinion because it fails to see the complete picture.

Admittedly, participating in full-time education at school has various benefits for teenagers. For one thing, it would strengthen their identity. Young people usually uncertain about their passions and interests, and they are still seeking for certain. Once they go to school, they could exposure to different fields of knowledge. In such a case, they may find which area is truly keen on learning. Besides this, school education also beneficial to society as a whole. As young people are experiencing the crucial stage of forming value system, if they enjoy mandatory education at school, they could be taught what is morally right and acceptable, preventing them from misleading by some unpleasant behaviors, this in turn would reduce their criminal tendencies in the future, contributing to foster a stable society.

However, we have to consider some exceptional cases. Those who equipped them with unique aptitude in arts and sports stay in school may restrict their potential success. There is few relevant experts neither in primary nor secondary school, and full-time education impede those talented young people to squeeze adequate time to take part in some art exhibition or sports competition. In contrast, if they leave school early, they could enjoy more professional training that given by associated experts and coach, and they could participate related activities, which is better for their career developments.

In conclusion, I believe that adolescents should stay at school before 18 years old since it brings many merits both for individuals and society. Those who have special talent could take part-time courses to master fundamental knowledge and correct moral value.