📋 学员提问 · Student Question
Today more and more old cities are being rebuilt and redesigned in order to be modernized.
What are the advantages and disadvantages
A: more old cities are being rebuilt and redesigned in order to be modernized 的好處
B1: 用if A>B>C
A: more old cities are being rebuilt and redesigned in order to be modernized 的壞處
B2: 用by contrast ???
Lynn 老師有說過, by contrast 不能用在講壞處的地方. 但Emily 老師說, 通常B1 不會用by contrast.
但B2 是講壞處, 又不能用. 請問by contrast 應該在什麼時候用??
還是我把 B1 改為講壞處, 用IF, A>B>C
B2 改為 講好處, 用by contrast
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謝謝老師
想让老师帮你批改写作？
Lynn的一对一保分课提供个性化写作诊断和逻辑修正
这个题目只是问好处和坏处，其实2段可以都用if结构写最简单。
我个人倾向于body 1不用by contrast，但是这个也是看题目分析，有的题目body1写by contrast也是make sense的，要看写的具体内容了
e.g. b1: 这个事情带来了若干好处。if ... modernized, it will ....
b2: however, it may bring some drawbacks. If......, it will.....