8.17 上海机考 G类大作文复盘

刚参加完8.17的上海机考（南丰城），虽然分数还没出来，但作文始终薄弱的我在这次大小作文过程中感觉到明显进步。所以首先想要感谢 Lynn和我的coach Fei Fei，如果不是他们的帮助，我可能还要走很多弯路。

下面是我回忆的大作文题目和我的答案。很多表达和实际情况有出入，但内容和ideas大致相同。

Topic：
Today more people prefer to watch films and TV programmes alone rather than with people together. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Answer：
It is becoming trendy for people to enjoy screen time by themselves instead of being accompanied by others. In my opinion, this development has more advantages than disadvantages.

On the one hand, watching films or TV alone could bring more individual satisfaction. Without others, people could choose whatever shows they like while sitting in front of TVs or computers. The flexibility also involves switching channels freely if the contents of what is played on do not satisfy the audience’s interests. Furthermore, an exclusive viewing time would ensure the concentration on what is happening on the show without worrying being interrupted by comments from their companions. In contrast, all of these benefits would be impractical when there are other viewers alongside.

On the other hand, independent audiences might sacrifice the chances of building closer relationships with their families or friends. It is widely known that spending time together is of great significance in establishing strong connections and sharing TV or movies jointly is an operative way to achieve this. Also, going to cinemas with friends could lead to discussing things in common while they exchange ideas about the story or stars related to the films they have watched before.

In my view, while I admit there are inevitable drawbacks of this tendency, the positive outcomes of immersing oneself in a private watching experience should be highlighted. Modern people are so busy with daily life that sometimes they need complete relief by shielding themselves from others. An occasional indulgence of watching films alone is helpful to alleviate pressures.

这个题目应该不是题库里的，但容易想到很多ideas。但简单题目并不保证能写出好文章，可能因为ideas太多，不能很好地组织起来应对题目，反而越写越乱。所以按照Lynn的方法先解题很重要。
作文应试情况：
1. 先写大作文，3分钟分析题目——确定题目类型、列题目关键词、body段的main ideas 到写完大作文一共用时40mins
2. 小作文用1分钟分析题目——确定tone、称谓、开头问候语、分段、是否缩写、结尾问候语、落款 到写完一共用时15mins
我之前大作文最高6.5，时间都很紧张，一定写到最后一秒。有几次结尾非常潦草，甚至字数都没写够。但经过Lynn的方法和Fei Fei的指导，这次考试时明显感到思路清晰，时间也充裕很多，我写完大小作文后还有时间检查一遍。
这次是抱着阶段性检测的目的来的，口语准备很不充分，听力也莫名其妙听走神，但就作文应试能力的提升来说还是很有收获。
个人感觉在备考阶段参加考试很有帮助，能够全面检测准备过程中的不足以及下一阶段的努力方向。
希望对大家有帮助！