Topic:
Many young people spend more free time in shopping malls. It make negative effects on both the young people and the society they live on. Do you agree or disagree?
keywords: young people, shopping malls, negative effects, young people and society
观点:部分同意
body1:年轻人爱逛商场对个人和社会的好处
逛商场→放松、社交
逛商场→就业岗位+消费→boost the local economy
body2:年轻人爱逛商场对个人和社会的坏处
逛太长时间→被广告、推销包围→冲动消费→财务困境
逛太长时间→占用本可用来提升自己的时间和精力→年轻人能力下降→劳动力素质下降
结尾:总结+my opinion
正文:
Consumerism has been gaining increasing popularity among youngsters these days and some argue that this trend would have adverse impacts on individuals as well as the whole society. While I accept this situation could bring benefits, its negative consequences should be seriously considered.
On the one hand, strolling around in a shopping center with friends is an effective way for younger generations to relax and conduct social activities. Modern youngsters are faced with higher pressure from the workplace as well as private life and buying commodities can help them release anxiety. Meanwhile, popular canteens and cafes in the shopping malls can serve a pleasant environment for young people to spend time with their peers, thus establishing stronger relationships. Moreover, from a social perspective, the local economy would be improved by shopping centers as their contribution to employment generation and consuming encouragement.
On the other hand, I would reckon that the outcomes associated with excessive shopping behaviors can be devastating. Spending too much time in shopping malls might result in impulsive payment as young customers are too vulnerable to be exposed to various advertisements and sales persuading. By doing so, many of these beginners in adult life might end up with financial problems. Also, it is so regretful for young people to waste time and energy on shopping that should have been utilized in self-enhancement, such as skill training or keep-fit exercise. The existing tendency could lead to an unqualified workforce in the long term.
To recapitulate, although there are positive effects brought by consumerism culture among youngsters, its drawbacks should be carefully predicted and well addressed.
Many young people spend more free time in shopping malls. It make negative effects on both the young people and the society they live on. Do you agree or disagree?
keywords: young people, shopping malls, negative effects, young people and society
观点:部分同意
body1:年轻人爱逛商场对个人和社会的好处
逛商场→放松、社交
逛商场→就业岗位+消费→boost the local economy
body2:年轻人爱逛商场对个人和社会的坏处
逛太长时间→被广告、推销包围→冲动消费→财务困境
逛太长时间→占用本可用来提升自己的时间和精力→年轻人能力下降→劳动力素质下降
结尾:总结+my opinion
正文:
Consumerism has been gaining increasing popularity among youngsters these days and some argue that this trend would have adverse impacts on individuals as well as the whole society. While I accept this situation could bring benefits, its negative consequences should be seriously considered.
On the one hand, strolling around in a shopping center with friends is an effective way for younger generations to relax and conduct social activities. Modern youngsters are faced with higher pressure from the workplace as well as private life and buying commodities can help them release anxiety. Meanwhile, popular canteens and cafes in the shopping malls can serve a pleasant environment for young people to spend time with their peers, thus establishing stronger relationships. Moreover, from a social perspective, the local economy would be improved by shopping centers as their contribution to employment generation and consuming encouragement.
On the other hand, I would reckon that the outcomes associated with excessive shopping behaviors can be devastating. Spending too much time in shopping malls might result in impulsive payment as young customers are too vulnerable to be exposed to various advertisements and sales persuading. By doing so, many of these beginners in adult life might end up with financial problems. Also, it is so regretful for young people to waste time and energy on shopping that should have been utilized in self-enhancement, such as skill training or keep-fit exercise. The existing tendency could lead to an unqualified workforce in the long term.
To recapitulate, although there are positive effects brought by consumerism culture among youngsters, its drawbacks should be carefully predicted and well addressed.