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Some people believe that governments should not support the arts (painting, music, sculpture) and instead support other areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
技能一：
Keywords：governments, support, arts (painting, music, sculpture), other areas
观点：不同意，分情况讨论
Body1: 政府不应该扶持艺术的情况&原因
Body2: 政府应该扶持艺术的情况&原因
技能二、三：
Body1: A-C
在经济欠发达国家和地区，政府不应该支持艺术，因为政府应把更多资源投入到改善人们基本生活的领域。
在经济欠发达地区，社会财富有限，人们生活水平不高，政府财政收入也有限。（核心词特点）
在这种情况下，大多数人并不关心艺术领域发展的好坏，如果政府把有限的社会资源用来支持艺术事业（题目条件），会造成资源浪费（结论1）。
政府应该把有限的社会资源投入到改善人民生活的领域，如医疗、教育、环境等（结论2）。
Body2: A-C
在经济较发达的国家和地区，政府应该支持艺术事业的发展，因为这样可以提高人们的生活质量和幸福感。
在经济发达地区，多数人们的基本生活有保障，政府有比较充足的财政收入。（核心词特点）
在这种情况下人们会有精神享受的需求，想参与艺术活动，如看画展、雕塑展、听音乐会等。
如果政府能够用一部分资源支持艺术领域的发展（题目条件），人们就能用更少的钱，享受更高质量的艺术表演（结论1），他们会感到愉快和幸福（结论2）。
结尾：
总结body1、body2.
技能一：
Keywords：governments, support, arts (painting, music, sculpture), other areas
观点：不同意，分情况讨论
Body1: 政府不应该扶持艺术的情况&原因
Body2: 政府应该扶持艺术的情况&原因
技能二、三：
Body1: A-C
在经济欠发达国家和地区，政府不应该支持艺术，因为政府应把更多资源投入到改善人们基本生活的领域。
在经济欠发达地区，社会财富有限，人们生活水平不高，政府财政收入也有限。（核心词特点）
在这种情况下，大多数人并不关心艺术领域发展的好坏，如果政府把有限的社会资源用来支持艺术事业（题目条件），会造成资源浪费（结论1）。
政府应该把有限的社会资源投入到改善人民生活的领域，如医疗、教育、环境等（结论2）。
Body2: A-C
在经济较发达的国家和地区，政府应该支持艺术事业的发展，因为这样可以提高人们的生活质量和幸福感。
在经济发达地区，多数人们的基本生活有保障，政府有比较充足的财政收入。（核心词特点）
在这种情况下人们会有精神享受的需求，想参与艺术活动，如看画展、雕塑展、听音乐会等。
如果政府能够用一部分资源支持艺术领域的发展（题目条件），人们就能用更少的钱，享受更高质量的艺术表演（结论1），他们会感到愉快和幸福（结论2）。
结尾：
总结body1、body2.
In some developing countries that many people still live in poverty , government should not support the art because they are not financial abundance , then education and medicine should always enjoy the authority’s priority funding, which are the essential needs for whole society. If government aim to invest education, people in those poor countries are able to study basic theory knowledge at school, and find a decent job in the future. Moreover people could get well treatment when they get ill with supporting by government. Both two investment are beneficial to quality of life of people and economy of society.
In some developed countries, government could support the art, because they equipped with sufficient funds. Art is an integral part of culture, if their government spend money on helping the art, for example, hold a music concert and art exhibition, people would learn various knowledge about art, which help them deepen understanding of culture of their own country that relate to art, therefore, it is more likely to increase their cultural identity. Meanwhile, when some art events be hold, it would attract lots of travelers to visit the country. An increase in the demand for related service and products, such as accommodation,transportation and tourism tickets, creating more job opportunities in those area, that would contribute to boost economy of the country.
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In some developed countries, government could support the art, because they equipped with sufficient funds. Art is an integral part of culture, if their government spend money on helping the art, for example, hold a music concert and art exhibition, people would learn various knowledge about art, which help them deepen understanding of culture of their own country that relate to art, therefore, it is more likely to increase their cultural identity. Meanwhile, when some art events be hold, it would attract lots of travelers to visit the country. An increase in the demand for related service and products, such as accommodation,transportation and tourism tickets, creating more job opportunities in those area, that would contribute to boost economy of the country.
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