上海A类机考
题目:
Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and attitudes by others in the same age. This is called "peer group pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer group pressure outweigh the advantages.
考场答案:
开头:支持peer pressure
Body1:peer pressure可以促进年轻人学习进步
Body2:因为年轻人容易接受前沿技术知识,peer pressure可以提高年轻人对于该类信息的积极态度并促进信息交流,有利于年轻人发展
Body3:如果没有很好的引导,peer pressure会助长年轻人不良生活态度的蔓延
总结:在有引导的前提下,支持pressure pressure
反思:
自己觉得写的不够扣题,没有明确点出利大于弊。(已出分:L8.5 R8 W6 S6.5)
想请Lynn老师点评下逻辑,是否有必要复议W?
感谢老师
题目:
Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and attitudes by others in the same age. This is called "peer group pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer group pressure outweigh the advantages.
考场答案:
开头:支持peer pressure
Body1:peer pressure可以促进年轻人学习进步
Body2:因为年轻人容易接受前沿技术知识,peer pressure可以提高年轻人对于该类信息的积极态度并促进信息交流,有利于年轻人发展
Body3:如果没有很好的引导,peer pressure会助长年轻人不良生活态度的蔓延
总结:在有引导的前提下,支持pressure pressure
反思:
自己觉得写的不够扣题,没有明确点出利大于弊。(已出分:L8.5 R8 W6 S6.5)
想请Lynn老师点评下逻辑,是否有必要复议W?
感谢老师