【题目】some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison, Instead, some of them should work with no pay in community to help people.

我的答案：
同意。

body1：对个人有好处。work->给他人提供帮助和便利->feel capable and valuable->improve self-esteem and self-satisfaction

body2：对社会有好处。work过程中需要communication->express themselves->别人就能understand他们，recognise他们的想法->他们feel更related->belonging->cohensive society

【我的问题】我写的这个是让罪犯在社区工作的好处，但没有论证some of them这个点，是不是应该说明一下为什么不是all of them？算是论证的不全面吗？

谢谢老师~