我从头到尾仔细了边听边做了笔记 在LYNN老师的建议下
然后我又回去看了一下老师的点评 我考场的那篇文章
题目对应词有的没提到，然后部分内容展开也必须要跟题目来回呼应。总结一句话，得多写多练习，下笔如有神！！！！
1.读题目 划限定词 有具体意思的名词/动词
人物 （children; teenagers; women; men）
地点 (countryside; city) 题目-段落
2.开头 结尾 观点 是否清晰 Agree/ disagree; both views 题目-段落
3.Body 段落
段落内部的练习
开头
BODY 段落
结尾段落 第一句 在回答题目吗？
Ideas; 每个句子， 和上一个句子，对应词是什么？ 句子结构； 用什么结构链接？ 题目-段落
句子-句子
准确表达
段落-段落
范文例子：
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantage and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
划限定词-如上
第二步-提观点
第三步-段落内部链接
(用的结构，对比结构) 满分范文： The reasons of this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university (题目对应) is rather restricted on terms of general knowledge and experience of the world (这群人的特点-common sense). By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places (对应directly from…), have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on.
Body 2- However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to adapt to the academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a job, or to do something completely different from a university course. （连接上一句，造成的结果-common sense） But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.
My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.
然后我又回去看了一下老师的点评 我考场的那篇文章
题目对应词有的没提到，然后部分内容展开也必须要跟题目来回呼应。总结一句话，得多写多练习，下笔如有神！！！！
1.读题目 划限定词 有具体意思的名词/动词
人物 （children; teenagers; women; men）
地点 (countryside; city) 题目-段落
2.开头 结尾 观点 是否清晰 Agree/ disagree; both views 题目-段落
3.Body 段落
段落内部的练习
开头
BODY 段落
结尾段落 第一句 在回答题目吗？
Ideas; 每个句子， 和上一个句子，对应词是什么？ 句子结构； 用什么结构链接？ 题目-段落
句子-句子
准确表达
段落-段落
范文例子：
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantage and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
划限定词-如上
第二步-提观点
第三步-段落内部链接
(用的结构，对比结构) 满分范文： The reasons of this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university (题目对应) is rather restricted on terms of general knowledge and experience of the world (这群人的特点-common sense). By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places (对应directly from…), have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on.
Body 2- However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to adapt to the academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a job, or to do something completely different from a university course. （连接上一句，造成的结果-common sense） But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.
My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.