Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Body1：
一些人认为家长应该承担teach children to be good social members的责任。
Educating children to respect and obey the rules of their community早在孩子入学前就开始了，家庭应该承担起这样的责任。
在陪伴孩子成长过程中，家长应该交给孩子基本的社会准则，如what is important in life, how they are expected to behave, and what role they will play in their world.
Body2：
另一些人认为学校应该承担teach children to be good social members的责任。
对于学龄后的孩子，school teachers and peers对他们的影响非常重要。
在校园生活中，孩子会经历working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society.
这些解决问题、团队合作、为集体做贡献的经历将是他们未来步入社会、做好社会公民的重要基础。
结尾：
In my opinion, becoming a valuable member of a community is much complicated than just learning a certain skill. It is more like something that an individual keeps learning throughout life and it should be the responsibility of every member of society to contribute to helping the next generation to become adequate members of that society.
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Body1：
一些人认为家长应该承担teach children to be good social members的责任。
Educating children to respect and obey the rules of their community早在孩子入学前就开始了，家庭应该承担起这样的责任。
在陪伴孩子成长过程中，家长应该交给孩子基本的社会准则，如what is important in life, how they are expected to behave, and what role they will play in their world.
Body2：
另一些人认为学校应该承担teach children to be good social members的责任。
对于学龄后的孩子，school teachers and peers对他们的影响非常重要。
在校园生活中，孩子会经历working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society.
这些解决问题、团队合作、为集体做贡献的经历将是他们未来步入社会、做好社会公民的重要基础。
结尾：
In my opinion, becoming a valuable member of a community is much complicated than just learning a certain skill. It is more like something that an individual keeps learning throughout life and it should be the responsibility of every member of society to contribute to helping the next generation to become adequate members of that society.