By Megan on 2020年6月10日, 星期三
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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historic objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

技能一
Keywords: public museums and art galleries, historic objects and works of art, computer.
观点:不同意
Body1:人们参观实体museums and art galleries的好处a(与网上参观比较)
Body2:人们参观实体museums and art galleries的好处b(与网上参观比较)
结尾:总结

技能二、三
Body1:A-C(+比较)
人们仍然要参观实体的museums and art galleries,因为这样他们参观的印象更深收获更大。
多数人参观museums and art galleries是为了学习、体验,有所收获。
当人们走进博物馆或画廊时,这种first-hand experience会让他们的参观体验更真实生动,如近距离观察展品、与讲解员交流等,这样的体验印象更深刻,人们收获更大。
如果人们只通过电脑观看展品,点开一些视频或图片,这样second-hand experience印象不会很深。
Body2:A-C(+比较)
实体的museums and art galleries能够吸引游客,为当地带来经济增长。
很多地方的museums and art galleries会通过展品展现当地的文化特色,这些地方是外地人了解当地文化的重要场所。
如果一个地方的museums and art galleries经营得很好,就会吸引游客参观,游客在当地的住宿、饮食和参观会创造就业岗位和消费,带动当地的经济增长。
如果这些museums and galleries 被网上参观取代,一些地方对游客的吸引力可能会减弱。
结尾:
总结。
这题和报纸会不会被替代是一样的 对吧 body段 要写unique的好处
你的body1写的更生动 body2带来旅游的好处 都是是实体的unique benefit 网上参观没有的好处 对了!!!
body1的first hand experience 我查了一下 解释是 First hand information or experience is gained or learned directly, rather than from other people or from books. School trips give children firsthand experience not available in the classroom.
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大约3年前
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body1的first hand experience 我查了一下 解释是 First hand information or experience is gained or learned directly, rather than from other people or from books. School trips give children firsthand experience not available in the classroom.


根据这个定义,body1 里面第三句话可以改成“当人们走进博物馆或画廊时,这种first-hand experience会让他们的参观体验更直接
这样是不是更好
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