By Sophie on 2021年2月05日, 星期五
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Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

我打算这样写
不同意
B1:与电影、电视等相比,书unique的好处:知识划分很系统。
B2:书unique的好处:方便记笔记。

这样的话,BODY段就没有提到书Boring这个事,该怎么办?如何改呢?
Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?


在第1个段落:
有的人觉得 读书boring 所以应该stop using
但是,我认为,读书也有unique 的好处,所以,即使有更有其他形式,也有必要保留书
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