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  2020年8月24日, 星期一
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In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so it is logical that men and women should share housework tasks equally(like cleaning and looking after children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?


观点:部分同意,男性应该分担,但不一定平分。
body1:
过去女性不工作,男性工作挣钱→女性应该承担更多家务
但如今 女性走入职场→对家庭有经济贡献,同时分散精力给工作→男性应该分担家务
这样双方都能达到工作和家庭的平衡。
body2:
虽然这样做是合理的,但不一定要平分家务。
因为:完全平分家务劳动不切合实际。
应根据夫妻双方工作强度和优势分担家务。
结尾:
总结观点

An increasing number of women are indeed entering the workforce and some argue that this modification entitles wives the right to share their housework with husbands. I would agree with the idea that men and women should undertake household duties together but in a more practical way rather than equally distributing the tasks.

While a higher proportion of women are stepping forward in their own careers, it is justifiable to make men contribute more to housekeeping. There was a time that when most females stayed at home and cared for other family members in all the respects were firmly connected with domestic affairs, while their counterparts taking charge of issues mostly outside the house. Today, however, the roles have changed by women transforming to another breadwinner of the family. With women's vigor being partaken by workplaces and their financial contribution to the domestic income, their obligations of house chores should also be allocated to, in most circumstances, their spouses. Therefore, both genders of the families would enjoy a balanced life between work and home.

Although liberating women from heavy trifles at home is reasonable, it does not necessarily mean equal distribution. It is unpractical impractical to separate daily household tasks precisely into two same parts for the spouses to share. In my opinion, a more plausible way to tackle the issue would be an assignment based on people's workloads and their strong points, which means the amount of housework on one's schedule could be decided by how much time and energy one could set aside for home and whether the allocated items match his or her merits. For this reason, I believe the housework-sharing issue should not be regulated in a uniform pattern but suiting suited to individual situations.

To recapitulate, while I am partially in favor of assigning more family responsibilities to men, it would be a more legitimate solution to make it a private decision rather than a social problem.
大约5年前
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#887
已接受的回答
In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so it is logical that men and women should share housework tasks equally(like cleaning and looking after children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?

不同意 有特情

B1:
夫妻双方平分domestic responsibilities有助于女性健康,家庭关系;
女人在做全职工作的时候也有压力,下班后应该也应该放松。
if couple双方都能分担一定的household chores,女性就能有更多的时间来relax and reduce the stress,这样有益于他们的physical 和mental health。Moreover,if 男性spouse帮助做家务事如cooking,washing和cleaning,女性感觉到gender equality,认为自己被respected,让wife更加relate to husband,能让夫妻感情更加strong;Lastly,if father 能参与更多looking after children的过程,就增加了父亲与孩子互动的机会,他们的关系也可能会变得更加紧密。

B2:
但是,没必要去衡量是否双方分担地equally。
if 夫妻双方中有一方不擅长某些家务,比如cooking,即使去接受了培训了也没有效果,当另一方更擅长cooking的时候可能就分担的多一些,对方就可以分担其他方面多一些。如果双方都没有时间,不擅长或者不愿意做的时候,可以请家政人员来帮忙或者采用相应的household appliance来做。我们都知道家务中的一点小事,都可能引发conflicts甚至crime。所以说这样的equality是relate 不是absolute.

Fei Teng
观点:完全同意

B1 (内因--即不得不做的理由). 男女平等,。因为工作,夫妻对家庭贡献平等,所以平分是合理的。 工作累--大家平分家务--大家都有时间更多的时间休息而不是一方需要做更多的家务。 得到很多的休息后,夫妻都会更productive----从而得到晋升----在经济为家庭做家庭做更多的贡献。

B2 (外因--做了会有更多好处). 一起做家务,增加夫妻双方情感,因为像一个team。相反如果不这样做,会导致矛盾,因为一方会觉得为家庭付出的更多。 矛盾会影响夫妻感情,可能会导致divorce. 另外,为小孩做一个好榜样。因为父母都在做家务,小孩也会参与进来,be diligent. 而勤奋的小孩get good grade.
大约5年前
·
#887
已接受的回答
In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so it is logical that men and women should share housework tasks equally(like cleaning and looking after children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?

不同意 有特情

B1:
夫妻双方平分domestic responsibilities有助于女性健康,家庭关系;
女人在做全职工作的时候也有压力,下班后应该也应该放松。
if couple双方都能分担一定的household chores,女性就能有更多的时间来relax and reduce the stress,这样有益于他们的physical 和mental health。Moreover,if 男性spouse帮助做家务事如cooking,washing和cleaning,女性感觉到gender equality,认为自己被respected,让wife更加relate to husband,能让夫妻感情更加strong;Lastly,if father 能参与更多looking after children的过程,就增加了父亲与孩子互动的机会,他们的关系也可能会变得更加紧密。

B2:
但是,没必要去衡量是否双方分担地equally。
if 夫妻双方中有一方不擅长某些家务,比如cooking,即使去接受了培训了也没有效果,当另一方更擅长cooking的时候可能就分担的多一些,对方就可以分担其他方面多一些。如果双方都没有时间,不擅长或者不愿意做的时候,可以请家政人员来帮忙或者采用相应的household appliance来做。我们都知道家务中的一点小事,都可能引发conflicts甚至crime。所以说这样的equality是relate 不是absolute.

Fei Teng
大约5年前
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#891
In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so it is logical that men and women should share housework tasks equally(like cleaning and looking after children). Agree or disagree?


技能1

agree/disagree

关键词: women, full-time job as men, share housework tasks equally

观点:中立(statement does not apply to all cases)
b1: men and women share housework equally的优点
b2:men and women share housework equally的缺点


技能2
b1:
核心词:women full time job
核心词特点:女性一天工作下来跟男性一样累,没有理由让女性来完全承担家务
a>b>c

b2:
核心词:men, equally share housework
核心词特点:男性一般情况下相比女性不擅长某些家务
by contrast


技能3
b1:
TC:男性和女性share housework equally有助于strengthen家庭关系

女性一天工作下来跟男性一样累,如果男性和女性能够平等分配家务,女性可以通过少做一些家务得到休息,而男性能够通过帮助女性做家务,比如cooking, washing, cleaning等明白做家务的不容易,从而更能够理解妻子;
moreover, 如果男性能够帮助女性做家务,女性能够感觉自己在家里被equally treated,这样能让妻子与丈夫更related to each other,能更feel intimacy

b2:
TC:然而平分家务会有一些弊端

让家干净整洁,一般被认为是女性的责任,所以女性会在长大的过程中被更多的被educated去学习一些家政课,导致女性会对一些家务更擅长,比如更会cooking,但是对另一些家务并不擅长,比如修灯泡。如果男性一些不会做的家务上,跟女性equally share housework,会导致男性做家务不efficient
by contrast,
如果擅长做某一些家务的一方能够更多的承担一些擅长的家务,比如女生更擅长烧饭,男生更擅长电器,这样根据不同家庭情况调整家务分配会更reasonable

In conclusion, it is necessary for men to do housework, while different families should adjust the situation of housework sharing in a more reasonable way.


老师我结构还有问题吗?
elsa wang 复习以下 技能1 Agree/ disagree 中立的观点

还有 技能1 的 所有类题目 纠错表格

你只需要 改技能1

你不是技能3的问题
你一直都是 技能1 和技能2
elsa wang 你看 Yifeng 的答案, 和你的 Body 2 有什么区别?
Megan

你先把 完整的逻辑 按照 其他人的 结构写一下哈

参考他们 每天的逻辑打卡 的格式哈
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