Day 2
我感觉技能1，2，3都有些不足。1技能中agree or disagree类的结构我觉得还行其它结构的不行，因为两次考试都是这个题型能到6我感觉结构没啥太大问题. 我觉得没上6.5到7应该是2，3技能有缺陷，逻辑有跳跃。下面是我的一篇作文。

题目：In some countries, the average weight of children is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.

What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

作文：It is a fact that a growing number of people are getting fat, which makes a negative impact for their health. I think this situation is caused by several factors and the government and individuals should work on it.

The reasons why people are getting obesity and unhealth are that they have an unhealthy dietary habit and lack exercises in daily life. People in some counties often eat unhealthy food such as hamburger, chips and milk tea, containing a high amount of sugar and oil but less nutrients. These foods are delicious, cheap and easy to buy , which become increasingly popular for young people as well as working adults. In addition, more and more people are busy with own studies or careers not having time to do sports due to the fast pace of city life and aware of doing exercises' importance. This life-style can decline their body functions in the long run.

I think that there are two ways to solve these problems. Firstly, in terms of government's view, public health is one of the foundations for a country's development so governments should take responsibility for helping their citizens establish healthy awareness in daily route. They can employ some experts about nutrition and sports to share scientific diet habit and effective sports' methods by medium such as programmers, newspaper and podcast, which enable people using right ways to reduce weight and increase immunity. Secondly, in terms of person's view, people should receive these suggests and seriously work out them day by day. Only in this way, people can get rid of obsity and improve physical condition.

Overall, it seems to me that causes of obesity in people reflect on diet and exercise. governments and citizens should together address these troubles.

Day 1 作业计划，麻烦老师帮我看看
我全职备考学雅思快一年了，方法一直不对，确实着急年底出分，下个月14号有考试，4课还是一起学习吧。
之前考了两次听读写说4.5 6.5 6 4和5.5 4.5 6 5；
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