关于reasons and solutions What caused this problem? What measures can be taken to solve it? 类型的题目 Lynn 老师给出的答案是:
Intro:改写问题
Body 1: 1个原因 60字
Body 2: 1个原因 60字
Body 3: 2个解决方法 80-100字
总结原因+解决方法
请问:能否写成以下格式?
Intro: 改写问题
Body 1: 2个原因 100字
Body 2: 2个解决方法 100字
总结原因+解决方法
- 结构笔记2,哪个题,给你印象最深? 分享这个题的答案 (提示: 一定要把Topic Sentence 完整的写出来)
Unpaid community service
Step 1:
读最后一句话,确定题目是agree/disagree类型
开头段:题目是观点,所以用It is believed that改写题目,并说明我的观点是同意
Body1:第1个原因为什么Unpaid community service需要放在在高中阶段以及这样做的好处
Body2:第2个原因为什么Unpaid community service需要放在在高中阶段以及这样做的好处
结尾是总结Body段的观点
Step 2 :
观点句:unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes,义务劳动应该被作为高中必修课的一部分
根据我的经验,这样的义务劳动是有好处的,Body1 Topic Sentence:义务劳动可以对高中生未来的就业找工作有帮助。Body2 Topic Sentence:义务劳动让高中生有sense of community,将来更容易成为有责任的个体。
A rise in standard of living in a country seems to benefit cities more than rural areas. What problems might those differences cause? How can these problems be reduced?
第一个问题:What problems might those differences cause? 是分析这个不同带来的问题,所以不属于原因类
第二个问题:How can these problems be reduced? 这个解决问题的solutions
Hello, Lynn, 分享一下多伦多昨天最新G类的大作文,Now children like to watch the same tv programmes and same computer games as their friends do, should they be allowed or prevented to do so
Today more and more old cities are being rebuilt and redesigned in order to be modernized. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
技能1:
Key words:old cities rebuilt and redesigned to be modernized
Body1:好处
Body2:弊端
结论:让步反驳
- 结构笔记2,哪个题,给你印象最深? 分享这个题的答案
印象最深的题目有两个 1. international tourism。rather than类题目,发现自己对这类题特别不敏感,写的时候反应了好半天。
intro:改写背景、观点+strongly disagree
body1:国际旅游不可避免的会产生tension,一些游客因为不了解当地文化会做出一些impolite behaviours.
body2:但国际旅游带来更多的是understanding,游客在旅行过程中会接触来自不同地区不同文化背景的人,通过face to face 的接触交流会更加深刻的理解不同的国家文化。
conclusion:两者都是国际旅游会产生的,其中understanding更多。因此不能因为the risk of tension 就忽视the benefits from understanding。
2. people who are over 60 years old should not work and retire earlier。should类题目,因为不认真审题写反了agree disagree。这个题自己加了一段让步段,不知道这样写对不对,希望老师改一下~
- 结构笔记2,哪个题,给你印象最深? 分享这个题的答案 (提示: 一定要把Topic Sentence 完整的写出来)
Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books because students find them boring and that children can learn from films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
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Step1,判断题型:Agree/disagree. stop...instead...
Step2,观点部分:划线句。
答题思路:disagree
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Intro:It is believed that … I strongly disagree with this statement.
Body1:书本的unique好处1,学生看纸质书不容易被其他信息distraction,能专心学习,并锻炼注意力
Body2:书本的unique好处2,提升学生的文字阅读能力,为今后进入社会deal重要的contract做准备
Conclusion:总结1和2
- 结构笔记2,哪个题,给你印象最深? 分享这个题的答案 (提示: 一定要把Topic Sentence 完整的写出来)
some people think that children should learn paint and draw, others believe that is a waste of time- both views 的问题
因为这个题我对两个观点都没法完全认同所以一开始有点犹豫会不会是“都不对”的观点,虽然老师说这种情况很少。
Answer:
Topic Sentence: There are conflicting views about the necessity of learning paint and draw. In my opinion, painting is an important aspect of education and should not put aside.
Body 1: There are various reasons why children should learn painting. 培养对美术的兴趣,丰富想象力,有利于孩子的创造力提升
Body 2: Others argue that learning draw is a waste. 学习紧张,没时间学画画
Conclusion: 应该学习画画,虽然时间有一点紧张但是学习画画并不会不利于知识学习,反而有助于学习成绩和学习能力的提高。
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