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  2021年3月30日, 星期二
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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historic objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

B1:博物馆和美术馆需要,因为可以让人们对展品的印象更深。
博物馆和美术馆中拜访的展品是实物,电脑上看到的是图片或视频。
如果人们去博物馆和美术馆看,能看到实实在在的东西,有firsthand experience。
当人们有firsthand experience,我们会使用更多的感官:视觉;听觉;甚至触觉 ,我们对于东西和东西背后代表的历史、思想印象更深。
如果人们从电脑上看,就可能印象不深。

B2:博物馆和美术馆需要,因为可以带动本地经济发展。
博物馆和美术馆是旅游景点。
如果人们去美术馆和博物馆看,可能需要去另一个城市看,还可能在博物馆所在城市住宿、吃饭或游玩其他景点,这些都需要花钱,当地的饭馆、宾馆等生意更好,能带动当地的经济。
如果人们电脑上看,不需要去某个地方,不会产生消费,就不能促进当地经济发展。

It is no doubt that a large number of historic objects and works of art can be seen from the computer. Therefore, it is argued that public museums and art galleries should disappear. I strongly disagree with this opinion.

One main reason is that public museums and art galleries leave people a great impression of the historic objects and works of art that are displayed. If people go to museums or art galleries, they will see real objects, whereas if they use the computer, historic objects and works of art are all in the form of pictures or videos. When visitors are exposed to real objects, they have firsthand experience. Such experience engages multiple senses: sight, hearing, and even touch, making people gain an in-depth understanding of the thoughts and culture of these objects. However, it is easy for people to forget the historic objects and works of art when they see those things from the computer.

Another reason is related to the local economy. Public museums and art galleries are usually places of interest. If people want to visit public museums or art galleries, they may need to travel to other cities. When this is the case, they may live in the hotels, eat at restaurants and visit other places of interest in the same city, thus giving money to these places. As a result, a large amount of money is earned and the residents in those cities become richer. Nevertheless, if people see objects and works of art from the computer, they don't need to travel to other places and spend money, which cannot contribute to the economy of any city.

In conclusion, based on the evidence analyzed, public museums and art galleries are still needed because those places are beneficial to both individuals and the local economy.
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同学,我觉得你这个开头改写有点怪怪的(毫无疑问。。。,因此,人们对于。。。有争议),好像语气太强烈了(因为只是有人宣称),我觉得有点夸张了,还像是加了一点主观感觉,直接简单改写可能更好一点;然后第二段我建议,你先写电脑上看这些东西的缺点,然后在写实地看的优点,这样还有by contrast的感觉,而不是对比两次可能会引起困惑。
个人观点:)
这个写的超级好的 😉 而且 结尾也超级扣题!
Fei Teng 看看Fei Fei 有没有补充哈
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