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  Monday, 17 August 2020
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Chenquan

Step 1:
经过我们approve 过的,完全准确的逻辑
用9个语法结构,翻译成英文
参考最新7天免费课 写作-语法课
或者 下面的视频
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=15g1HZ8Zbcw


Step2:
用grammarly 修改,然后给coach 看
coach 给你 分析 哪个语法需要提高-看语法课

如果上完课的学生/免费课的学生
grammarly 修改完,自己根据9个语法结构 分析错误

Grammarly 可以修改的 常见错误? :
-大长句 但是 语法不清晰的 句子
-重复单词提示 并且 给出 更好的 单词建议 (我最喜欢的)
- 标点符号 用错

我放了几个 修改的例子 在下面的截图
Fei Teng 也会去考试
有空的话 也会放一些上来


免费的版本,只是修改简单的语法
做不到上面 我提到的
所以 建议你 购买付费 premium 版本

grammarly 购买方法:
Title点击这个链接
只购买3个月的版本
你只需要 最多3个月 考到7分
比较换算



Step 3:
继续写3个文章,自己总结语法错误

错误总结表 在最新7天课
看截图 ?


额外的bonus:
grammarly 修改以后的文章,发到这里,我们简单 帮你看一下
有没有 明显的 影响7分的错误
Emily Jin Fei Teng
Kathy Chloe 你们 都可以写全篇了
隔一天 选择1个 已经写对的 逻辑 ;我批改过的
翻译成完整的文章 放在这里

选择自己觉得难翻译的
翻译的时候 一定要按照 你写的逻辑
不要 在翻译的时候 把自己的逻辑 全部都改了

有不会的词,把中文 改一个说法 就OK了

翻译2-3周以后,再拿去IDP 批改 基本7.5+ 考试的时候 就是稳稳的过了

如果 机考的话
打在机考软件里面 +打在这里

如果是 笔试
用纸写+打在这里

加油 加油
1 year ago
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#702
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a posisitive or negative development?



Recently, the number of people who chose to live by themselves has increased in some countries. I think it is a negative trend.

Living alone may impact people's mental health. When people live by themselves, there would be no parents or friends staying by their side or sharing their experiences. They would not have the opportunities to receive any support and be understood by others. It is more likely for these people to experience loneliness and feel disconnected from others, having a passive attitude toward their lives and feeling depressed. Once people have depression, they probably could not focus on their job. If those people who would like to live alone increased, more people would not work effectively or even be fired because of low working production. It would result in a more difficult life situation for them, becoming even more stressed.

Meanwhile, this phenomenon may have some disadvantages for society. If people choose to live alone, each of them would probably require individual accommodation. When the number of people with the requirement increased while the amount of the house is limited, the residence price may go up to another level, resulting in a rise in people's live expenses. In this situation, some of them may not be able to afford their bills and tend to ask for more fundings from the government. To guarantee people's lives, the government may probably provide financial assistance. It will lead to a reduction of the findings allocated in other fields such as education and health. Those people, who need funding from the government for their studies or treatment, may feel the government not stand by their shoes and not connect to the government. Therefore, society would become less cohesive.

As discussed above, the phenomenon of more people choosing to live alone is a negative trend because it would be detrimental to people's mental health and negatively impact social cohesion.


老师 写的时候需要定时吗?
这次是笔试,我觉得笔试耗时更多,写的单词更正确,

机考打字比较容易把正确的单词打错,如果时间不够来不及检查挺影响的,虽然机考对写作很友善。
1 year ago
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#703
如果我的阅读正确率能上去,听写的时候不紧张。我觉得机考也挺好的。
1 year ago
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#762
好贴心 谢谢分享 这个必须 MARK :D
Chloe

Living alone may impact people's mental health.
living alone = 主语用 verb ing

When people live by themselves, there would be no parents or friends staying by their side or sharing their experiences.
语法课:When的用法, 逗号后面 + will

They would not have the opportunities to receive any support and be understood by others.

It is more likely for these people to experience loneliness and feel disconnected from others, having a passive attitude toward their lives and feeling depressed.

Once people have depression, they probably could not focus on their job.


If those people who would like to live alone increased,
more people would not work effectively or even be fired because of low working production.

It would result in a more difficult life situation for them, becoming even more stressed.
这句 想一下啊 怎么不用result in 因为这个并不是特别precise:D

当你的动词 越broad越不容易的高分

e.g. Eating junk food everyday may result in obesity.
vs
Eating junk food everday may increase the risk of obesity
Kathy Chenquan 记得 至少 隔天 写个文章哈
Chenquan 我们等等这次的成绩 可以 你先只写 逻辑
1 year ago
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#769
Chloe

Living alone may impact people's mental health.
living alone = 主语用 verb ing

When people live by themselves, there would be no parents or friends staying by their side or sharing their experiences.
语法课:When的用法, 逗号后面 + will

They would not have the opportunities to receive any support and be understood by others.

It is more likely for these people to experience loneliness and feel disconnected from others, having a passive attitude toward their lives and feeling depressed.

Once people have depression, they probably could not focus on their job.


If those people who would like to live alone increased,
more people would not work effectively or even be fired because of low working production.

It would result in a more difficult life situation for them, becoming even more stressed.
这句 想一下啊 怎么不用result in 因为这个并不是特别precise:D

当你的动词 越broad越不容易的高分

e.g. Eating junk food everyday may result in obesity.
vs
Eating junk food everday may increase the risk of obesity




好的老师,
麻烦你看看这个逻辑行不行~
我今天写这个~

Some believe students need to do voluntary jobs (no paid) for helping the local community. agree/disagree

A
Introduction :改写题目,不同意

Body1:让步反驳
虽然让学生在在community做一些voluntary jobs可以减少community的人工支付,减少communit有的财政压力。但可能有一些负面的result。因为学生没有工作经验,就有可能不具备一些做事的skills。
当他们做这些jobs的时候就有可能会犯错,导致这些工作不能被很好的完成,甚至把一些事情做失败。
如果他们因为做不好事情而受到community的人的指责,有可能就会对voluntary job有一个不好的体验
当他们毕业后,就有可能不愿意为社会的其他机构做voluntary的工作。
如果社会上做voluntary工作的人少了,那么有可能愿意无偿帮助别人的人就少了,社会就不会变的更cohesive。

Body2:即使有效果,会有其他弊端
即使学生能完成一些简单的工作,这也会对生在其他方面有影响。
当学生需要花一定的时间去做voluntary job的时候,他们在学习上的时间就会减少。
一旦学生没有足够的时间去review他们的academic studies和预习新的知识, 就有可能影响他们的考试成绩
若学生的不能取得好的result,就有可能不能去好的college,
就有可能就没办法学习他们想要学的知识和技能,找不到他们喜欢的工作, 没有decent 收入

conclusion:as discuss above, it is unnecessary for students don't have to do unpaid voluntary jobs because they this may bring negative impacts to not only students themselves but also the society.
1 year ago
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#771
Kathy Chenquan 记得 至少 隔天 写个文章哈
Chenquan 我们等等这次的成绩 可以 你先只写 逻辑

好的Lynn Yang
1 year ago
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#772
some people think the best type of party is 大家都互相认识,other people think people make new friends at party is better.
both views and your opinion


我觉得写得时候很麻烦,因为总是people来people去的,

Recently, there are conflict views about whether the best party is people knowing each other or having opportunities to make new friends. In this essay, both views will be discussed, followed by my own ideas.

Those people who support the idea that everyone knows each other is better may present the following arguments. Some parties with specific purposes, such as birthday parties, bachelor parties, or baby shower, a more lively atmosphere could be created if people familiar with each other. When people facing people they already knew, they would share more common topics to talk about deeply and feel more relaxed and enjoyable. If people have a better experience at the party, they may have the opportunities to strengthen their friendship and increase the sense of belonging to each other.

However, those who think that a best party should be people not knowing each other can also support their ideas. One of the benefits for people to attend a party with a commercial purpose is building new social connections. If people they meet at the party are someone they already knew, they would not be able to meet new friends. Those people, especially some businessmen, may not able to find potential business partners. By contrast, a party with many strangers can be regarded as a platform where lots of new ideas and behaviors would be shared. When people attend such parties, they would probably be inspired by those differences and then produce innovative ideas. If business people could make friends with someone they don't know, they would expand their networks and have opportunities to cooperate with more people. Once they have a new business, they would have more output, helping them earn decent money.

As discussed above, if the party is a private one, it would be better if people know each other at the party because it can increase their sense of belonging. If it is a commercial party, meeting new people is better as it could provide opportunities for people to build connections and increase their profit.
1 year ago
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#774
Chloe

Living alone may impact people's mental health.
living alone = 主语用 verb ing

When people live by themselves, there would be no parents or friends staying by their side or sharing their experiences.
语法课:When的用法, 逗号后面 + will

They would not have the opportunities to receive any support and be understood by others.

It is more likely for these people to experience loneliness and feel disconnected from others, having a passive attitude toward their lives and feeling depressed.

Once people have depression, they probably could not focus on their job.


If those people who would like to live alone increased,
more people would not work effectively or even be fired because of low working production.

It would result in a more difficult life situation for them, becoming even more stressed.
这句 想一下啊 怎么不用result in 因为这个并不是特别precise:D

当你的动词 越broad越不容易的高分

e.g. Eating junk food everyday may result in obesity.
vs
Eating junk food everday may increase the risk of obesity




Lynn Yang
老师这样写可以吗
It could lead to a more difficult situation for them, suffering from greater life pressure.
okok
1 year ago
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#779
In some countries, more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

B1 独居是不好的,因为独居会使人们感到不快乐。
如果人们不和其他人一起居住,就会减少很多在生活中和别人相处的时间
也会减少很多和别人分享自己生活的机会
这样就会降低我们和别人情感上的连结
当我们遇到困难的时候,就会觉得没有人理解和支持我们
因此我们就会觉得不快乐

B2 越来越多的人独居还会增加冲突。
一个人居住很多事情都是按自己的想法去做,无需考虑他人
例如何时起床何时洗澡,一周打扫几次卫生
如果越来越多的人都选择独居,人们就会越来越习惯只考虑自己的需求
降低人们站在他人角度思考问题的能力
从而降低人们的empathy
当人们意见不一致的时候,就会增加人们的冲突。

Nowadays, more and more people prefer to live alone than in the past. And I believe that it is a negative trend and will bring many disadvantages to society.

Living alone is not good; the primary reason is that it will make people feel unhappy. If people do not live with others, the time that is spent to stay together with them will be reduced,which will lose the opportunities to share our lives to them as well. In this case, the connection between us will be weaker and weaker. When there are difficulties, we will feel that nobody understands and supports us. Therefore, we will feel unhappy.

Besides, more and more people live alone will lead to an increasing number of conflicts. People can do lots of things according to their thoughts without considering others’ when they live alone, for example, when to get up, when to go bathing and how many times to do the cleaning in a week. If more and more people choose to live alone, they could form a habit of only considering their own need, eventually losing the ability to stand up other shoes. Therefore reduce their empathy. When people hold different views, it will increase their conflicts.

As discussed above, living alone not only makes people unhappy but also causes more conflicts. Therefore I take the view that living alone is a negative development.


grammarly修改过的
节约水资源 bothview

Nowadays, there is a conflicting views regarding whether fresh water should be provided free of charge. This essay will discuss both side of the argument and follow by my own perspective.

For those who support the idea of water should be free to use may put forth the following statement. It is widely known that water plays a vital role in our lives. It helps us maintain our body functions properly, such as metabolism and cognitive skills, so that we enjoy a health lifestyle. Meanwhile, many sectors need enough water to operate their business, for instance, fishing industry, restaurant and so on. If those sectors could use fresh water free of charge, they are more likely to run their business effectively and earn a decent profit, that in turn would improve the quality of life.

However, the opponent to this way of thinking have their own opinion, which can also justify. They believe that government should impose some restrictions on using fresh water. While there a plenty of water resources in our planet, the pure water which can be directly used by human are very limited, because there are significant amount of water regardless it comes from river or lake may contain contamination and sediment. Thus, those water need to be filter, allowing the harmful pollutant remove from water. Those process should cost people a large amount of funding. Especially, for some area suffer the water scarcity, people even have to build some canal to deliver fresh water to this area.

As discussed above, although water is of paramount important to our lives, we have to control the fresh water usage, to ensure water can be use in efficient ways and avoid the squander.
Kathy 这个就有7分了 甚至7.5了
你的句子结构很多样 而且 时态都超级多样
Eileen Gao 你读一下 她写的这个风格


我们做一个练习哈

你把 body 段落 重新读一次 然后 把所有 make, lead to, reduce, increase 想办法 重新说一下 中文 再写英文 避免用这些词
我帮你画出来的 句子

Chenquan 你也帮忙 改写她的句子 很好的练习哈

Fei Teng Emily Jin 你们也可以给学生 试一下这个练习 已经到了 7 的学生 可以这样 自己修改 建立awareness

Living alone is not good; the primary reason is that it will make people feel unhappy. If people do not live with others, the time that is spent to stay together with them will be reduced,which will lose the opportunities to share our lives to them as well. In this case, the connection between us will be weaker and weaker. When there are difficulties, we will feel that nobody understands and supports us. Therefore, we will feel unhappy.


Besides, more and more people live alone will lead to an increasing number of conflicts. People can do lots of things according to their thoughts without considering others’ when they live alone, for example, when to get up, when to go bathing and how many times to do the cleaning in a week. If more and more people choose to live alone, they could form a habit of only considering their own need, eventually losing the ability to stand up other shoes. Therefore reduce their empathy. When people hold different views, it will increase their conflicts.
Chloe 你party这篇写的很好啊,整篇读起来很通顺,people用individuals, local residents, etc去替换,具体看语境。
1. When people facing people they already knew, they would share more common topics to talk about deeply and feel more relaxed and enjoyable. 》》》When somebody verb-ing这样语法不对哈.
可以改成: When individuals attend a party that they know everyone, they would have more common topics to share and talk deeply, thus making/allowing them feel more relaxed and enjoyable.
2. One of the benefits for people to attend a party with a commercial purpose is building new social connections.
可以稍微改动:One of the benefits for people to participate in a party is to build up new social connections for commercial purposes.
Chenquan

Nowadays, there is a conflicting views regarding whether fresh water should be provided free of charge. This essay will discuss both side of the argument and follow by my own perspective.
, followed by my own perspective


For those who support the idea of water should be free to use may put forth the following statement. It is widely known that water plays a vital role in our lives (好句子). It helps us maintain our body functions properly, such as metabolism and cognitive skills, so that we enjoy a health lifestyle (好句子?). Meanwhile(好句子?), many sectors need enough water to operate their business, for instance, fishing industry, restaurant and so on. If those sectors could use fresh water free of charge, they are more likely to run their business effectively and earn a decent profit, that in turn would improve the quality of life(好句子? 时态好).

However, the opponent to this way of thinking have their own opinion, which can also justify (The opponents can also justify their opinion )..They believe that government should impose some restrictions on using fresh water (删掉 前面一定说了opponents). While there a plenty of wate resources in our planet, the pure water which can be directly used by human are very limited, because there are significant amount of water regardless it comes from river or lake may contain contamination and sediment. Thus, those water need to be filter, allowing the harmful pollutant remove from water. Those process should cost people a large amount of funding. Especially, for some area suffer the water scarcity, people even have to build some canal to deliver fresh water to this area (很好).

As discussed above, although water is of paramount important to our lives, we have to control the fresh water usage, to ensure water can be use in efficient ways and avoid the squander.
Chenquan Fei Teng 应该有 7.5 了她和Kathy 都一样
1 year ago
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#804
Chloe 你party这篇写的很好啊,整篇读起来很通顺,people用individuals, local residents, etc去替换,具体看语境。
1. When people facing people they already knew, they would share more common topics to talk about deeply and feel more relaxed and enjoyable. 》》》When somebody verb-ing这样语法不对哈.
可以改成: When individuals attend a party that they know everyone, they would have more common topics to share and talk deeply, thus making/allowing them feel more relaxed and enjoyable.
2. One of the benefits for people to attend a party with a commercial purpose is building new social connections.
可以稍微改动:One of the benefits for people to participate in a party is to build up new social connections for commercial purposes.

谢谢 Emily Emily Jin
1 year ago
·
#806
Lynn Yang 第一句改了中文意思,后两句改了英文表达


  1. Living alone is not good; the primary reason is that it will make people feel unhappy.
  2. 独居是不好的,因为独居会使人们感到不快乐

    独居是不好的,因为独居会带给人们不快乐
    Living alone is not good; the primary reason is that it will bring people.unhappiness




  1. Besides, more and more people live alone will lead to an increasing number of conflicts.
  2. 越来越多的人独居还会增加冲突

    Besides, more and more people live alone will result in an increasing number of conflicts.




  1. Therefore reduce their empathy. 从而降低人们的empathy

  2. therefore there is a significant reduction in their empathy.

1 year ago
·
#807
Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. discuss both views and give your opinion

B1 一些人认为运动对社会很重要,是因为运动可以促进社会经济的发展。
运动赛事常常会吸引很多的体育爱好者来观看,同时他们也会购买各种各样的纪念品
这样就会带动很多领域的需求,例如 他们会飞到别的城市去参观比赛,需要购买机票,会带动航空领域的需求,
还有他们很多人也会购买自己支持的队伍的衣服鞋子以及对应的纪念品,会带动零售行业的需求
这些需求都刺激了经济的增长,促进了经济的发展
因此运动确实对社会很重要

B2 然而,有很多人,参与体育活动的目的,只是为了休闲娱乐,所以,他们会认为这只是一个leisure activity.
例如下班后他们去游泳,打球,并不是为了成为世界冠军,而是为了缓解工作中的压力, 以及放松自己的身体。
而且,他们也没有想过,自己放松了以后,对于社会的影响:自己身体放松以后会使工作更有效率,带出更多的工作产能,从而对国家经济产生好的影响
当然,他们也看不到,体育比赛,对于整个社会在文化交流和经济增加上面的影响

结尾 我的观点:运动对于社会有很大的影响
有的人认为是一个leisure activity,只是因为,他们从个人的角度出发,看待这个问题,没有看到长远的对社会的影响,但这并不意味着,sports 本来就没有对于社会的impacts,实际上,运动创造了很多需求,带动了社会经济的发展,对社会至关重要。


People hold conflicting views as to whether sports play an important role in society or not. In my opinion, sport certainly brings benefits to society, not only is a leisure activity.

Some think that sports are valuable for society because this will encourage the development of the social economy. Sports events usually have a strong attraction for sports lovers to watch; meanwhile, they purchase a variety of souvenirs as well. In this case, it will result in a significant increase in demanding from many fields, for example, flying to other cities to watch live games would create the needs of the aeroplane business. Also, some people collect things that represent their loving teams like logoed clothes and shoes, which will elicit the retrial industry’s needs. All the things are helpful to economic improvement. Therefore sport does value much to society.

Nevertheless, for some people, the primary aim of taking part in sports is just for having fun and relax. They consider it as a leisure activity. One clear example is that people go swimming or play balls after work, not for becoming the champion, but to release the stress from work and relax their physical bodies. However, they have not ever deeply thought the impact on society: when they feel emotional and physical comfort, it will contribute to efficient work and more productivity, thus prompting the countries’ economy. Besides, they do not have a profound vision of the influence on culture exchanges through sports games either.

Therefore, I take the view that sport has a significant influence on society. Some people regard it as a leisure event just because they think of it from a personal perspective, not from the long-term effect on society. But it does not mean that sports have not social impacts. As a matter of fact, sports do as an essential function in society.
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