是“运气” 还是“努力” ？
看看她的复习计划, 自己判断吧 :)
所有VIP学员, 每节课都需要提交作业, 连续3天不提交作业
第1阶段： Day 1-Day 6
Recipes 可以和任何ABC词组使用, 没有语法错误（课程Day1-Day5）
2. 背诵ABC 词组（课程Day6-Day17）
学习目标： 写出7+以上的Task2 （课程Day6-Day17）
Day1: Day1＋Day6 （ 结构＋背诵Group1abc)
Day2: Day2+Day7 (开头结尾模版＋背诵Group1 abc)
Day3: Day3＋Day8 （Body段落Topic sentence+背诵Group 2 abc)
Day4: Day4+Day9 (Recipe+背诵Group3 abc)
Day5: Day5+Day10 (语法＋背诵Group4 abc)
Day6: Day6+Day 11 ( 1篇Group 1 abc 的完整文章+背诵Group5 abc)
Day7: Day7+Day12 (1篇Group 2 abc的完整文章＋背诵 Group 6abc)
第1阶段, Day1-Day6： 审题＋Recipes ＋背诵ABC
Day1-Day3: April 11th－14th
作业2: 10个题目, 开头,结尾,中间段落
批改项目1： 语法错误 ,给出正确用法,做出解释
I believe that neither the importance of introducing new technology
nor providing free education should not be ignored
批改中会解释 “ double negative” 用法错误,避免再出现同样的错误
表格分为3栏: 错误句子, 错误类型, 正确用法
通过Excel 表格中的“筛选功能” , 让她直接找到了自己错误频繁的语法点
保证你 Take actions, on track :)
总结：Day1-Day3: April 11th－14th ，完整了开头,结尾，结构的学习
作业 1: 4 组recipes
总结: Day 4 主要解决了语法问题
Day5：April 15th 继续巩固语法
第1阶段总结： April 10th-16th,结束了前5天的学习
包括3个项目： 语法修改, 4个项目分数, 语法统计表格
4月17号, 她才开始学习7天！ ！
总结： 前10天, 她已经可以写出7.5分的Task2
第3阶段： Day12-Day14： Task1 +背诵abc
由于马上要考试了,她只是收看了Task 1 的课程
没有练习Task 1 :(
课程包括Task1 A类+G 类
如果Task2的基础很好, 只要完成Task1的视频课程, 都没有太大的问题
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效果比往期学生好很多, 语法一目了然, 让我可以更高效得指导她复习。
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In some countries old people have the opportunities to work so long as they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a growing trend that in some countries more and more old people keep working as long as they want. This trend has both merits and demerits which will be analyzed in this essay. In my opinion, the benefits are more than the drawbacks.
There are numerous benefits if old people work as long as they want. Firstly, this can benefit companies and organizations. Old people mostly have rich experience and resourceful networks, which can help to provide good analyze of the situations that companies and organizations may overcome, thereby contributing to sensible and even crucial decisions. Moreover, old people are trained to have good social skills, that help them to solve conflicts between colleagues and motivate people as a team at work, thereby enhancing the cohesion of the companies and organizations. Furthermore, old people keeping working as long as they like can benefit the society. It is generally acknowledged that the percentage of old people in the population is higher and higher in many counties such as Japan, which leads to a heavy financial burden, especially the high cost of pension. It is the possibility that old people can work as long as they like in the USA, that has alleviated the cost of pension. （强调句) If people all stopped working at 60 or 65 year old, it would reduce the funding from the government in other areas which are catalysts for economy, such as technology industry. (虚拟语气）
On the other hands, we should not be oblivious to some drawbacks of this phenomenon. Firstly, old people keeping working as long as they like can reduce the job opportunities of young people. Since the job market has limits in the number of employment vacancies, old people keep working can leads to an increase of unemployment of young people. This may cause young people feel unfair and insecure, and even cause resentment to old people and to the society. However, this can be solved if government allocates more funds to business activities, which can generate more employment opportunities for young people to help them find jobs. Moreover, keeping working as long as they like can be unhealthy for old people. Since old people are vulnerable to chronic diseases, keeping working may impose physical and mental stresson them, which may jeopardize their health. However, old people can always notice if they are comfortable or not at work, and it is their free choice to stop working if they like, thereby preventing them from be harmed by work.
As discussed above, Old people working as long as they like has both advantages, such as benefits for companies and society, and disadvantages such as increasing competition with young people in job market and health problems. In my opinion, the merits outweigh the demerits.
NB: I may have made grammar mistakes such as “old people keep working can benefit….” several times.
The bar graph compares the usual activites as part of bedtime regular preparations for children from three age groups from 1 year old up to 8 years old in the USA.
It is clearly shown in the graph that reading is the most popular activity of all the activities as part of bedtime routine, which accounts for 65%, 56% and 52% in age group of 1-3 years old, 4-6 years old and 7-8 years old, respectively. Meanwhile, watching TV and eating before bedtime are the least popular activities and similar in all age groups, ranging from 15% to 18%, except that eating is significantely higher in 1-3 year old reaching 25%.
Interestingly, the percentage of brushing teeth of all activities before bedtime increases according to an increase in age, which is 20% in 1-3 year old, but increases to 35% and 45% in 4-6 years old and 7-8 years old, respectively. By contrast, eating before bedtime decreases during age increasing, which accounts for 25% in 1-3 year old group, while makes up to 18% and 15% in 4-6 years old and 7-8 years old, respectively.
In conclusion, this graph shows that reading is the most popular activity among all the activities as part of bedtime routine. Percentage of brushing teeth increases while percentage of eating for all the activities before bedtime decreases as children grow up